Re: Legion (Indefinite Hiatus)

Re: Legion (Indefinite Hiatus)

by Disllilk

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3rd world war has started. Goverment decided to sent people to safety in shelters. Rayan was on a cruise sailing toward one of the shelters. Everything would be okay if not a nuke. Nuke falling straight at him and 999 other people on a cruise. He woke up as a soul and got reincarnated by Sloth god. Again, the only problem was the fact, that only he reincarnated out of 1000 souls that were with him, as such he got reincarnated into 1000 bodies.

 

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improve your writing style a bit and it should be ok