Through Norr's Eyes

Through Norr's Eyes

by jay8765

Norr, children of Mary and Abbot, is thought of as a monster since the moment he is born by everyone but his own mother because of his dangerous eyes. Those eyes affect Norr as well as everyone around him, but no one knows to what extent...

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NoodleSlinky
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This story has a great concept and I love the character and the fact that his power has limits. I only wish they capitalized on the father's scheming at the beginning or at least show some sign that Norr is not just there to be abused. It is pleasantly surprising to have a special twist on the story though. Heck, there are several twists that caught me off guard and I loved them. I hope this story continues to develop and that Norr's power is further expanded on.