Shovels In Spades

by Lone

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

We all have dreams of becoming powerful, becoming the cool mage that rules the world, living as the dashing rogue who can steal a kingdom's entire royal treasury undetected, or perhaps, the valiant knight whose prowess on the battlefield is unmatched by all. 

However, when the apocalypse strikes, you can only use what you have at your disposal, be that guns, baseball bats, your fists, or maybe, just maybe, a shovel.

One young man who goes by the name of Darenzo has just had his world altered into one that is now the focal point of some sort of experiment.

Just at the end of his shift at the skip site, a worldwide announcement was made, that not only changed Darenzo's life, but also the lives of all of the Earth's inhabitants.

Can Darenzo survive and thrive in this changed world? Or will his growing madness best him? The answers to these questions can only be revealed with time.

[Goal of 2 chapters per week, the only exceptions being announced breaks or emergencies]


(The new cover art is a courtesy of the very kind and talented ssddx and was designed using the fanart cover of cthulupillar as the base.)


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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Book 1 Prologue: Change and Shovel ago
B1: Chapter 1: Building and Fusion ago
B1: Chapter 2: Traps and Rage ago
B1: Chapter 3: Merits and Sleep ago
B1: Chapter 4: Base and Clothes ago
B1: Chapter 5: Status and Jewel ago
B1: Chapter 6: Rimmy and Robbing ago
B1: Chapter 7: Seal and Platinum ago
B1: Chapter 8: Temptress and Confusion ago
B1: Chapter 9: Faith and Offer ago
B1: Chapter 10: Poison and Charisma ago
B1: Chapter 11: Question and Return ago
B1: Chapter 12: Stupid and Restored ago
B1: Chapter 13: God and Crippled ago
B1: Chapter 14: Smash and Suspicion ago
B1: Chapter 15: Princess and Anacusis ago
B1: Chapter 16: Respect and Perks ago
B1: Chapter 17: Citizen and Buffer ago
B1: Chapter 18: Court and Motivation ago
B1: Chapter 19: Wall and Earthquake ago
B1: Chapter 20: Cabin and Lighthouse ago
B1: Chapter 21: Suggestions and Requirements ago
B1: Chapter 22: Upgrade and Charity ago
B1: Chapter 23: Exhaustion and Note ago
B1: Chapter 24: Box and Safe ago
B1: Chapter 25: Syringe and Return ago
B1: Chapter 26: Baseball and Event ago
B1: Chapter 27: Respect and Transfusion ago
B1: Chapter 28: Crocs and Rash ago
B1: Chapter 29: Ring and Mithril ago
B2: Chapter 30: Leader and Food ago
B1: Chapter 31: Conical and Enfield ago
B1: Chapter 32: Hamson and Return ago
B1: Chapter 33: Matt and Dorian ago
B1: Chapter 34: Consumption and Life ago
B1: Chapter 35: Rimmy and I ago
B1: Chapter 36: Choice and Changes ago
B1: Chapter 37: Jesters and Fort ago
B1: Chapter 38: Fiona and Villain ago
B1: Chapter 39: Fun and Crafting ago
B1: Chapter 40: Failure and Levels ago
B1: Chapter 41: Pride and Split ago
B1: Chapter 42: Cube and Table ago
B1: Chapter 43: Tome and Stress ago
B1: Chapter 44: Graveyard and Cecil ago
B1: Chapter 45: Pala and Gods ago
B1: Chapter 46: Candle and Reality ago
B1: Chapter 47: Jorden and Harvesting ago
B1: Chapter 48: Trench and Volunteers ago
B1: Chapter 49: Crusher and Plan ago
B1: Chapter 50: Og and Denied ago
B1: Chapter 51: Gravity and Tide ago
B1: Chapter 52: Illusion and Damage ago
B1: Chapter 53: Confidence and Cyanide ago
B1: Chapter 54: Fear and Danger ago
B1: Chapter 55: Wound and Vine ago
B1: Chapter 56: Towel and Smile ago
B1: Chapter 57: Mave and Dream ago
B1: Chapter 58: Crushed and Conclusion ago
B1: Chapter 59: Absolute and Return ago
B1: Chapter 60: Punishment and Thanks ago
B1: Chapter 61: Mini and Endearing ago
B1: Chapter 62: Questions and Luck ago
B1: Chapter 63: Design and Past ago
B1: Chapter 64: Rankings and Changes ago
B1: Chapter 65: Loyalty and Speech ago
B1: Chapter 66: Laws and Request ago
B1: Chapter 67: Agreements and Butterfly ago
B1: Chapter 68: Size and Walls ago
B1: Chapter 69: Upgrades and Guesses ago
B1: Chapter 70: Mayor and Miller ago
B1: Chapter 71: Girly and Knife ago
B1: Chapter 72: Departure and Condo ago
B1: Chapter 73: Survivors and Soldiers ago
B1: Chapter 74: Acquisition and Rearming ago
B1: Chapter 75: Kabatay and Demands ago
B1: Chapter 76: Shark and Snipers ago
B1: Chapter 77: Sentence and M939 ago
B1: Chapter 78: Shock and Thoughts ago
B1: Chapter 79: Ahab and Threat ago
B1: Chapter 80: Relationship and Exchange ago
B1: Chapter 81: Barrier and Gab ago
B1: Chapter 82: Gloves and Roger ago
B1: Chapter 83: Mansion and Rose ago
B1: Chapter 84: Warning and Information ago
B1: Chapter 85: Emotion and Hindsight ago
B1: Chapter 86: Stats and Resistances ago
B1: Chapter 87: Training and Database ago
B1: Chapter 88: Trust and Hug ago
B1: Chapter 89: Guilt and Pipes ago
B1: Chapter 90: Meeting and Four ago
B1: Chapter 91: Line and Lasers ago
B1: Chapter 92: Ease and Phases ago
B1: Chapter 93: Plan and Deadlift ago
B1: Chapter 94: Defeat and Slice ago
B1: Chapter 95: Tears and Hope ago
B1: Chapter 96: Struggle and Madison ago
Book 1 Epilogue: Puzzle and Dream ago
Book 2 Prologue: Aila and Punishment ago
B2: Chapter 1: Beater and Titan ago
B2: Chapter 2: Gestures and Broken ago
B2: Chapter 3: Watermelon and Whiskey ago
B2: Chapter 4: Cute and Tower ago
B2: Chapter 5: Lightning and Need ago
B2: Chapter 6: Rebuilding and Status ago
B2: Chapter 7: Barracks and Smithy ago
B2: Chapter 8: Quests and Announcements ago
B2: Chapter 9: Useless and Bullies ago
B2: Chapter 10: Dungeon and Medals ago
B2: Chapter 11: Pursuer and Replacement ago
B2: Chapter 12: Books and Bonus ago
B2: Chapter 13: Teens and Cages ago
B2: Chapter 14: Bravery and Captives ago
B2: Chapter 15: Rocky and Vincent ago
B2: Chapter 16: Storybooks and Deranged ago
B2: Chapter 17: Citizens and Peace ago
B2: Chapter 18: Passion and Underwhelmed ago
B2: Chapter 19: Reika and Hamson ago
B2: Chapter 20: Rankings and Moustache ago
B2: Chapter 21: Stats and Arrest ago
B2: Chapter 22: Changes and Chicken ago
B2: Chapter 23: Titan and Chips ago
B2: Chapter 24: Foot and Bank ago
B2: Chapter 25: Changes and Entertainer ago
B2: Chapter 26: Food and Concoction ago
B2: Chapter 27: Humvee and Smoke ago
B2: Chapter 28: Benjamin and Trench ago
B2: Chapter 29: Crater and Edward ago
B2: Chapter 30: Scouts and Bunker ago
B2: Chapter 31: M1 Abrams and Bonus ago
B2: Chapter 32: Rebirth and Hand-cannon ago
B2: Chapter 33: Snapping and Deal ago
B2: Chapter 34: Departure and Return ago
B2: Chapter 35: Sister and Parents ago
B2: Chapter 36: Barbarossa and Resolve ago
B2: Chapter 37: Brother and Anger ago
B2: Chapter 38: Evolution and Status ago
B2: Chapter 39: Chains and Rage ago
B2: Chapter 40: Bonfire and Friendship ago
B2: Chapter 41: Citizens and Growth ago
B2: Chapter 42: Vibrations and Feeling ago
B2: Chapter 43: One Monster and Bound ago
B2: Chapter 44: Hollow Victory and Great Loss ago
B2: Chapter 45: Newfound Grief and Warranted Guilt ago
B2: Chapter 46: Funeral and Phoenix Heart ago
B2: Chapter 47: Aila and Text ago
B2: Chapter 48: Pondside Talk and Lizardman Attack ago
B2: Chapter 49: Slap and Absorption ago
B2: Chapter 50: Terms and Distraction ago
B2: Chapter 51: Fusion and Voice ago
B2: Chapter 52: New Citizens and Bob ago
B2: Chapter 53: God Facts and Heat ago
B2: Chapter 54: City Lord and Rimmy's Core ago
B2: Chapter 55: Morte and Shen Mu ago
B2: Chapter 56: Magical Skills and Laughing Skull ago
B2: Chapter 57: Lovers Duel and Shovel Arts ago
B2: Chapter 58: Ellie Richie and The Watching Gods ago
B2: Chapter 59: Mountainous Eruption and Greater Telekinesis ago
B2: Chapter 60: Cleaning Up and Second Wave ago
B2: Chapter 61: Battle Plan and Death Magic ago
B2: Chapter 62: Multicoloured Skull and Diving Titan ago
B2: Chapter 63: Reinstated Advisor and Disgruntled Mu ago
B2: Chapter 64: Future Project and Useless City ago
B2: Chapter 65: Base Upgrades and Keep ago
B2: Chapter 66: System's Displeasure and Mu's Arrival ago
B2: Chapter 67: Negotiations and It's Not Over Yet ago
B2: Chapter 68: Rimmy's Fighting Resolve and Unbridled Rage ago
B2: Chapter 69: Morte's Will and Racial Adjustments ago
B2: Chapter 70: Teasing Maddy and Expedition to Middletown ago
B2: Chapter 71: Lich Stats and Daz's Beginning ago
B2: Chapter 72: Teleportation Relay and Ellie's Request ago
B2: Chapter 73: Advice and Golden Tickets ago
B2: Chapter 74: System's Attention and Esper Abilities ago
B2: Chapter 75: Daz's Abilities and Ho Ran ago
B2: Chapter 76: Big Bo and Golf Game ago
B2: Chapter 77: Charts and Daz's Counteroffer ago
B2: Chapter 78: Merit Points and Uriel ago
B2: Chapter 79: Fiona's Nerves and The Keep's Rooms ago
B2: Chapter 80: The Scottish Full-English and The Lottery Winner ago
Madison Artwork ago
B2: Chapter 81: System's Description Blockade and Bob's Growth ago
B2: Chapter 82: Bob's Words and Mu's Crimes ago
B2: Chapter 83: Daz's Crimes and A Clone's Worries ago
Book 2 Epilogue: A Thank You and First-time Lust ago
Book 3 Prologue: Venice and Plans ago
B3: Chapter 1: Grave Butchering and Completed Records ago
B3: Chapter 2: Rimmy's Fans and Sally ago
B3: Chapter 3: Steven's Approaches and Poor Timing ago
B3: Chapter 4: Private School and Racial Change ago
B3: Chapter 5: Holy Cross and Gambit's Signet ago
B3: Chapter 6: Alien Laptop and Dice Set ago
B3: Chapter 7: Translation Skill and Fighting Ring ago
B3: Chapter 8: Champion of Quarterstaves and Test of Strength ago
B3: Chapter 9: Mu's Cardboard and Madison's New Worries ago
B3: Chapter 10: Data Tracker and The General Auction's Start ago
B3: Chapter 11: Pheldorapod and A VR Capsule ago
B3: Chapter 12: Achievements and Cold Reunion ago
B3: Chapter 13: Red Lightning and Davido's Joy ago
B3: Chapter 14: Skill Cap and Successful Cracking ago
B3: Chapter 15: Class Upgrade Token and Larry Billard ago
B3: Chapter 16: Nearing Level Three and Merit Ranking ago
B3: Chapter 17: Slot Machine Shakedown and Split-consciousness ago
B3: Chapter 18: Winning Streak and Strange Family ago
B3: Chapter 19: A Request For Crusher and Hsiao-han ago
B3: Chapter 20: War and Total Evolvers ago
B3: Chapter 21: Ruler Auction and Final Item ago
B3: Chapter 22: Pheldorapod's Considerations and 25-Million ago
B3: Chapter 23: Class Change and Existing Skill Upgrades ago
B3: Chapter 24: Crystal and Rimmy Gets Some Upgrades ago
B3: Chapter 25: Upgraded Classes and Friends Fighting ago
B3: Chapter 26: Contracting Gems and Third King ago
B3: Chapter 27: Rimmy's Growing Fanbase and Flying Trial ago
B3: Chapter 28: Flying Results and Sword Mastery Challenge ago
B3: Chapter 29: New Promise and Weakness Trial ago
B3: Chapter 30: Krishan Ladakh and Updated Ranking ago
B3: Chapter 31: Worldeater and Maddy's Success ago
B3: Chapter 32: Mr Barrier and Secret Override ago
B3: Chapter 33: Pala's Determination and Hamson The Spade ago
B3: Chapter 34: Merit Star and Baggage ago
B3: Chapter 35: Tokens Galore and Merit Point Averages ago
B3: Chapter 36: Unfortunate Andre and The Second Lot ago
B3: Chapter 37: Crusher's Success and Xiao Meimei ago
B3: Chapter 38: Grand Proclamation and Headache ago
Daz Art + Rose Art ago
B3: Chapter 39: Champion of Cooking and Excruciating Pain ago
B3: Chapter 40: Battle Axe and Rose's Warning ago
B3: Chapter 41: A Father's Twisted Pride and The Auction's Conclusion ago
B3: Chapter 42: Shift Locking and Naming ago
B3: Chapter 43: Passives and Pouting Madison ago
B3: Chapter 44: William's Loyalty and Third Set of Walls ago
B3: Chapter 45: Welcome Speech and B-ranked Base ago
B3: Chapter 46: Different Universes and City Choosing ago
B3: Chapter 47: Fort Sky and GriD CrosS ago
Fort Sky Art + Crusher Art ago
B3: Chapter 48: Crusher's Threat and Rose's Visit to The Station ago
B3: Chapter 49: Visit to Turtle Island and Talks of Tea ago
B3: Chapter 50: Pool and Madison's Status ago
B3: Chapter 51: Alteration and Fiona's Struggle ago
B3: Chapter 52: Praying and Status Tweaking ago
B3: Chapter 53: New Quest and Choice Selections ago
B3: Chapter 54: Bei Fan and Secret Observers ago
Early Davido Hamilio Art + Minor Announcement ago
B3: Chapter 55: Scavengers and Jeremy ago
B3: Chapter 56: Mirroring and Soul Independence ago
B3: Chapter 57: Sovereigns and Candy ago
B3: Chapter 58: Daz's Solution and Useless Gloves ago
B3: Chapter 59: Amanda & Alek and Airship Engineer ago
B3: Chapter 60: Promises and The Loser Fool ago
B3: Chapter 61: Daz's Offer and Evil Ruffians ago
B3: Chapter 62: Resurrection and Spirit Formation ago
B3: Chapter 63: Soul Corrosion and First Official Complaint ago
B3: Chapter 64: Idris' Upset and Madison's Hug ago
B3: Chapter 65: Rose's Plans and Big Bo's Second Contract Offer ago
B3: Chapter 66: Talks of Loans and Bank Upgrades ago
B3: Chapter 67: Fighting Clones and Personalities ago
B3: Chapter 68: Cycle Three Starts and Goals ago
Hsiao-Han Artwork + Announcement Reminder ago
B3: Chapter 69: Crusher's Loyalty and Greg's Decision ago
B3: Chapter 70: SSS-ranked Item Token Usage and Tough Choice ago
B3: Chapter 71: Racing Ridomochi and Estranged Espers ago
B3: Chapter 72: Wheelchairs and Dormitory ago
B3: Chapter 73: Taxation Plans and Greg's First Orders ago
B3: Chapter 74: Waterford's New Buildings and Argument ago
B3: Chapter 75: Avulaway's Desperation and Mythical Cities ago
B3: Chapter 76: Alphorians and Explosive Surprise ago
B3: Chapter 77: Delve Into The Deep and Madison's Worries ago
B3: Chapter 78: Message From Rose and Illuminating Helmet ago
B3: Chapter 79: Tackling The Illusion and The Sword In The Sea ago
B3: Chapter 80: Genocidal Request and Hatred ago
B3: Chapter 81: Mofolo's Fate and The Sorry State of Atlantis ago
B3: Chapter 82: Fishy Smell and Return to Waterford ago
B3: Chapter 83: Unexpected Reunion and Accidents Happen ago
B3: Chapter 84: Accidents Definitely Happen and Early Negotiations Over Dinner ago
B3: Chapter 85: Questioning Lyle and Itchy Face ago
B3: Chapter 86: A Week of Progress and Visit to Tokyo ago
B3: Chapter 87: Meeting an Emperor and Duel of Threats ago
B3: Chapter 88: Councillor Rimmy and Aila's Change ago
B3: Chapter 89: Shovel Arts Ranks Up and Plans Are Moved Into Motion ago
B3: Chapter 90: Sleepy Maddy and Meeting Las Vegas' Mayor ago
B3: Chapter 91: Brother of Luck and Sandy's Intuition ago
B3: Chapter 92: At The Roll of a Dice and Who Among You? ago
B3: Chapter 93: Rose's Worry and Aston's Unheard Pleas ago
B3: Chapter 94: Firefighters and Lunatics ago
B3: Chapter 95: Ordering The Clones and Nuclear Threat ago
B3: Chapter 96: A Meeting of War Leaders and Terrorists ago
B3: Chapter 97: Lieutenant Anders' Honesty and A Last-ditch Effort ago
B3: Chapter 98: War Rewards and Mu's Disliking of Jim ago
B3: Chapter 99: California's Majority Citizen Ruler and Change of Future Plans ago
Book 3: Epilogue: Criminal Punishment and A Kingdom's True Founding ago
Book 4: Prologue: True Faith and Symbolic Departure ago
B4: Chapter 1: Prison Life and Onward to Gold ago
B4: Chapter 2: 20 Trials and Expedition Camp ago
B4: Chapter 3: Pala's Faith and The First Trial ago
B4: Chapter 4: Observers and Eyes ago
B4: Chapter 5: Trial Completion and Ak & Tek's Offer ago
B4: Chapter 6: First Permanence and Stars ago
B4: Chapter 7: Quest Completion and El Dorado's Temples ago
B4: Chapter 8: Alexandrite's Abilities and Singing Contest Winner ago
B4: Chapter 9: Mother and Kingdom-wide Progress ago
B4: Chapter 10: Scout Reports and The Ethics of Respect ago
B4: Chapter 11: Friendly Citizens and Crumbling New York ago
B4: Chapter 12: Crusher's Goal and Embers ago
B4: Chapter 13: Brother and Birthday Presents ago
B4: Chapter 14: Impending Awakening and Revisited Memory ago
B4: Chapter 15: Failure and Promised Reward ago
B4: Chapter 16: Oily Smell and A New Guild ago
B4: Chapter 17: Master Merit's Ambition and Quiz ago
B4: Chapter 18: Exam Results and Talks of Surnames ago
B4: Chapter 19: Silver and Visiting Mu ago
B4: Chapter 20: Duel of Reapers and Shúzuì's Development ago
B4: Chapter 21: Suffering and Discussing Godly Skills ago
B4: Chapter 22: A Week and Total Merit Sum ago
Book 4 Chapter 23: First Proper Permanence and Instinctual Alarm ago
B4: Chapter 24: Merciless Ruler and Eye-Opening ago
B4: Chapter 25: Leaving Las Vegas and Arriving at New York ago
El Dorado Artwork ago
B4: Chapter 26: Emma's Condition and The Fearless ago
B4: Chapter 27: Thoughts on Ranks and A 'Chat' With Master Sorola ago
B4: Chapter 28: Deceleration Deliberation and Truth Shines ago
B4: Chapter 29: Unclear Future and Regarding Tutors ago
B4: Chapter 30: City Life and Selfishness ago
B4: Chapter 31: A Clingy Maddy and Moustache Meets Tank ago
B4: Chapter 32: The King's Speech and Useful ago
B4: Chapter 33: First Demonstration and Summoning Price ago
B4: Chapter 34: Inclination and Dancing ago
B4: Chapter 35: Feeling Timeline and Unwavering Acceptance ago
B4: Chapter 36: Vanessa's Thoughts and Sandy's Request ago
B4: Chapter 37: Bloodline Experiments and A Father's Adoration ago
B4: Chapter 38: Earnest Hope and Bitter Resentment ago
B4: Chapter 39: A Week and Eastward Conquest ago
B4: Chapter 40: Hsiao-han's Weapon and Clarity ago
B4: Chapter 41: Promise to Hsiao-han and Diplomatic Arrival ago
B4: Chapter 42: Intentions Made Clear and Meeting The Monster ago
B4: Chapter 43: Pact and Russian Crusher ago
B4: Chapter 44: Aegles and Hugs Fix ago
B4: Chapter 45: Jasper Throne and Enemy ago
B4: Chapter 46: Specific and Par ago
B4: Chapter 47: Warning and Loyalty ago
B4: Chapter 48: Temple and Adya ago
B4: Chapter 49: Questions and Seed ago
B4: Chapter 50: Aren and 57-Pages ago
B4: Chapter 51: Killer Arrow and Tracker ago
B4: Chapter 52: Daz's Message and Mofolo's Sea ago
B4: Chapter 53: Training Internal Energy and Love ago
B4: Chapter 54: Request to Meet and Fighting Urges ago
B4: Chapter 55: Family Motives and City Collector ago
B4: Chapter 56: Surrounded and Bad Mood ago
B4: Chapter 57: The Emperor's Decision and Rebuilding Begins ago
B4: Chapter 58: Rimmy and Seizure ago
Madison Christmas Artwork ago
B4: Chapter 59: Cleared Debt and Sooner or Later ago
B4: Chapter 60: Growth and High King ago
B4: Chapter 61: Settling Kings and To Korea ago
B4: Chapter 62: Hunters and Grandparent ago
B4: Chapter 63: 39 Siblings and Future Vision Shenanigans ago
B4: Chapter 64: Contracting Silence and Date Plans ago
B4: Chapter 65: Dinner and Daryl Crowthorne ago
B4: Chapter 66: Stars and Mmm ago
B4: Chapter 67: News and Press Conference ago
B4: Chapter 68: Grandparents' Advice and Permanence Predicament ago
B4: Chapter 69: Ashborne and Unexpected 'Guest' ago
B4: Chapter 70: The Priest and Explaining To Do ago
B4: Chapter 71: Trial and Regrets ago
B4: Chapter 72: Semester Two Begins and Goals ago
B4: Chapter 73: Gag Order and Altros' New Letter ago
B4: Chapter 74: Muscle Density and North ago
B4: Chapter 75: Summons and Token Usage ago
B4: Chapter 76: War and Carrier ago
B4: Chapter 77: Gunshots and Gunshot ago
Book 4 Chapter 78: Cardinal and Confirmation ago
B4: Chapter 79: The King's Orders and Passing Souls ago
B4: Chapter 80: Contemplation and Press Conference ago
B4: Chapter 81: Mythical Exposure and Emperors Reacting ago
B4: Chapter 82: Tears and Empathy ago
B4: Chapter 83: Children and Gloomy ago
B4: Chapter 84: Wonderland Plans and Tamer Search ago
B4: Chapter 85: The Twins' Class and Mu's Counsel ago
B4: Chapter 86: Skill List and Telepathic Conversation ago
B4: Chapter 87: New Skills and Emotional Pressure ago
B4: Chapter 88: Mercenary Mission and A Door ago
B4: Chapter 89: Truth and Might ago
B4: Chapter 90: Victory and Trouble With The Trolley, Eh? ago
B4: Chapter 91: Observing a Monarch and Michiru ago
B4: Chapter 92: Riddle and Qunjara ago

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emberwing
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shovels are actually valid weapons...

i like the story a lot and i get that the shovel doesn't scream effectuve weapon, but they have and are still used as mellee weapons in war. ww1 they tended to use their shovels as melee weapons because the knives didn't kill fast enough (ended up being a very painfull long death whilst bleeding out) and that isn't even mentioning warrior monks who fought with shovels (and then dug graves for the dead with them).

the only serious issue i have with the story is the "original" tag that is on it.

Abnormalus
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apocalypse & kingdom building

This is an entertaining read, the Lit of the Litrpg does not feel pasted on top. The kingdom building is great to follow and the main character does not make me want to hate him as some of the stories that go for op and slightly evil for the lulz.

EpicDumpster-fire
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I lovie it, keep up the amazing work!

Lets be honest... I love the shovel as primary weapon and the Mc demented relationship with his golem, it's a fun ride.

Mclick90
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Not sure why all the bad ratings but in my opinion this novel continues to be very exciting and I continue to love reading it! Some don't like what th MC chosen in his personal development or town building but the author has a method to the madness and it benefits are shown in the later chapters. Please continue writing as you do have skills and can't wait to read more! 

thanatos4134
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I am going to be honest I went into this story with no expectation of it being good the reviews paint it in a bad light and while not the best I've ever read it was the second story on royal road to actually get me to read all it's current chapters and I will be following the story as more chapters come out and I think that's the best you can hope for a story that keeps you engaged.

James Rogers
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I am writing this review at the beginning of book 4. At first, I was skeptical of the book series as it started out, quite frankly, terrible. It has great world-building and an awesome status but unfortunately the terrible characters and decision-making process of the characters sort of ruined that for me. I was however pleasantly surprised towards the end of the 2nd book and the beginning of the 3rd book as the quality of writing increased dramatically over time. The author did a great job of improving his writing by the 3rd book. The main thing that I suggest for him to retain more readers and get better reviews would be to heavily edit the first two books and improve them to the standard of the later books.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

CrimsonEclipse18
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I'm just really enjoying it. Yeah. The story has flaws, a lot, but I'm a sucker for stories like this. Life sucks right now, and this story made it less sucky, so I appreciate that the author hs continued to persevere. 

kyom
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Very Entertaining and well thought out. The main character has development, plus very visable the the emotion an personal growth or change over the course of the story (or what i have read so far). i have enjoyed the reading of this story but my only comlaint is the it has sexual content but the scene(s) does the 'touching each other' then fade to black and next day. like why isnt there a lesser warning like 'Sensual content' or 'Nudity N/A'. 

dahman mc
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Every review that gives bad characters, is not really reading the chapter till the mc characters developed. 

Because it is the way of the system, story, and plot told to the reader. 

I mean really, read it 

MadHat3r
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I would like to see more of this, so until something comes around that ruins this story for me here are 5 stars to atract other people