Ryley Allard: Demon Law Expert

by mataaitai

Original HIATUS Comedy Fantasy Mystery Magic Male Lead Secret Identity
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity

Ryley Allard isn’t a demon, and everyone in the Demon World knows it. What they don’t know is that he understands next to nothing about how a criminal justice system actually works. A detective? A lawyer? A law expert? If it means getting to keep his head attached to his body, he’ll be whatever he has to be… Even if that means he has to create the demon law system from the ground up, one mystery at a time.

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Chapters are 900~2000 words.

The cover art comes from google images and is property of Nironiro. If you are Nironiro and want your art removed from my fiction, please contact me and I will do so.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - Entering and Breaking (1) ago
Chapter 2 - Entering and Breaking (2) ago
Chapter 3 - Entering and Breaking (3) ago
Chapter 4 - Locked Room Murders Succ (1) ago
Chapter 5 - Locked Room Murders Succ (2) ago
Chapter 6 - Locked Room Murders Succ (3) ago
Chapter 7 - Locked Room Murders Succ (4) ago
Chapter 8 - Interview with a Succubus (1) ago
Chapter 9 - Interview with a Succubus (2) ago
Chapter 10 - Interview with a Succubus (3) ago
Chapter 11 - Pre-Trial Tribulations (1) ago
Chapter 12 - Pre-Trial Tribulations (2) ago
Chapter 13 - Trial with Fire (1) ago
Chapter 14 - Trial with Fire (2) ago
Chapter 15 - Trial with Fire (3) ago
Chapter 16 - Trial with Fire (4) ago
Chapter 17 - Trial with Fire (5) ago
Chapter 18 - Trial with Fire (6) ago
Chapter 19 - Trial with Fire (7) ago
Chapter 20 - Trial with Fire (8) ago
Chapter 21 - Trial with Fire (9) ago
Chapter 22 - Rising from the Flames (1) ago
Chapter 23 - Rising from the Flames (2) ago
Chapter 24 - Rising from the Flames (3) ago
Chapter 25 - A Whole New (Demon) World ago
Chapter 26 - Petty Phantom Theft (1) ago
Chapter 27 - Petty Phantom Theft (2) ago
Chapter 28 - Home Suspicious Home ago
Chapter 29 - Hot Dog Heist (1) ago
Chapter 30 - Hot Dog Heist (2) ago
Chapter 31 - A Turn for the Weird (1) ago
Chapter 32 - A Turn for the Weird (2) ago
Chapter 33 - A Turn for the Weird (3) ago
Chapter 34 - Bocce Bloodshed (1) ago
Chapter 35 - Bocce Bloodshed (2) ago
Chapter 36 - Bocce Bloodshed (3) ago
Chapter 37 - Bocce Bloodshed (4) ago
Chapter 38 - Bocce Bloodshed (5) ago
Chapter 39 - Bocce Bloodshed (6) ago
Chapter 40 - Bocce Bloodshed (7) ago
Chapter 41 - Bocce Bloodshed (8) ago
Chapter 42 - Bocce Bloodshed (9) ago
Chapter 43 - Balls of Steel (1) ago
Chapter 44 - Balls of Steel (2) ago
Chapter 45 - The Bocce Soul (1) ago
Chapter 46 - The Bocce Soul (2) ago
Chapter 47 - Safe Inside ago
Chapter 48 - It's all in the Family (1) ago
Chapter 49 - It's all in the Family (2) ago
Chapter 50 - It's all in the Family (3) ago
Chapter 51 - Control Freak ago
Chapter 52 - Trials without Honor or Humanity (1) ago
Chapter 53 - Trials without Honor or Humanity (2) ago
Chapter 54 - Trials without Honor or Humanity (3) ago
Chapter 55 - Trials without Honor or Humanity (4) ago
Chapter 56 - Trials without Honor or Humanity (5) ago
Chapter 57 - Trials without Honor or Humanity (6) ago
Chapter 58 - Hell's Kitchen ago
Chapter 59 - The Room ago
Chapter 60 - The Thing (1) ago
Chapter 61 - The Thing (2) ago
Chapter 62 - Ashes to Ashes ago
Chapter 63 - The End to a Long Night ago
Chapter 64 - Insecticide ago
Chapter 65 - Invite Only (1) ago
Chapter 66 - Invite Only (2) ago
Chapter 67 - Life's a Lich (1) ago
Chapter 68 - Life's a Lich (2) ago
Chapter 69 - Life's a Lich (3) ago
Chapter 70 - Life's a Lich (4) ago
Chapter 71 - Life's a Lich (5) ago
Chapter 72 - Life's a Lich (6) ago
Chapter 73 - Life's a Lich (7) ago
Chapter 74 - Life's a Lich (8) ago
Chapter 75 - Life's a Lich (9) ago
Chapter 76 - And Then You Die ago

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Tacroy
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Somehow makes more sense than Phoenix Wright

This story is very clearly inspired by the Phoenix Wright games, yet somehow despite the demons with no concept of "laws" manages to make more sense than the games it's inspired by.

Polaris Archon
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What's there to say other than this story is unique? 

-Swimming in sarcasm, swimming in satirical remarks, swimming in lenny faces (goddamn Lylli) and swimming in con artistry. Goddamn author this is ace attorney only with horns and horny involved, please just die... And on a side note, even though this story is top-worthy, it won't gather much attention since 70% of RRL readers are five-year-old LitRPG retards. 

drizz
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I'm too frustrated to write a proper review, but know that all the characters are acting about as real as porn stars, the plot is idiotical and the world building ridiculously lazy.

The MC is retarded and his actions illogical, just like the actions of virtually every damn other character.

At least the grammar is a solid 5/5.

 

Fucking weaboos man.