The Splintered Luck
Yuri is faced with an unlucky situation as he is trying to steal some invaluable artifacts. He is surrounded by enemies, and just as he was about to give up, something very unlikely happens (just his luck), and he wakes up in an unfamiliar place, with an unfamiliar, young and cute body?! Enter a new world with magic and gods, where Yuri will try to earn back his status as the greatest thief and master of heists!
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It's very well written.
The story is funny and entertaining.
Looking forward to reading more!
Isn't Yuri supposed to be some super-awesome master criminal? Why suddenly so weak-willed in the tailor's shop? Immediately giving in and wearing the pink dress doesn't match the character. The fact a well-known bishop can publicly threaten to force a "young lady" through the town naked is also suspicious. Not to mention said bishop should probably be more courteous around someone her very-real Goddess personally reincarnated and allows to possess one of her divine artefacts?
Why do so many gender-bender fics fail epically at having the MC adjust to their new body? I get that they're usually tagged "comedy" but that doesn't mean the authors can just force "shame" all the time for no reason, right? Shouldn't authors at least try to write characters and situations that actually make sense?
Or has this author just done a terrible job at introducing the first two characters of their novel? I'll probably never know because I can't bring myself to start reading chapter 5.
Amazing read, I can't get enough of Yuri's antic's. The trouble she causes along with the comedy in her adventures is absoultely fantastic. This story would make a great anime too! The adventures are great but what really sells this story for me is the interactions with characters. If you want a great read you can't do much better than this story.
Use Shift or Caps Lock please.
Even it's a name you don't uppercase it.
You're getting so close. I am rooting for you. Don't stop now. You have come too far. You can do it! You're doing well, and I know you will feel much better about it when it is done.
much much much better than nikowrite again pls :(
Love this story it's main character is awesome :)
''my little man is gone'' best quote i have heard in this site. too bad i am not the first to give a rating of 5/5.
you simply got to love them gender-benders man, and the slight humor just makes it shine more. plus the main character is super likable, i do not see any problems with the grammar, so here 5/5 cookies.