Beyond Worlds

Beyond Worlds

by patrickborg

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What happen to the world when a man got the tool he want to dominate the universe. This is a history of man that unleash his deep self and conquer everything.

 

Note 1: a beginner in English

Note 2: this history gonna be very slow

Note 3: be warned this is not for weak heart

I decided to remake this work. In the begging, I was going with a rich and detailed work chapter by chapter and end up realising that the progress was slow and demotivating for me to continue.

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