Heir of Wilberforce

by Wilberforce

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance LitRPG Magic Male Lead Secret Identity Strong Lead

In a world where there are seven lands, in a world where people can control spirits, and in fact, wield elements like Fire, Water, Lightning, Earth, and the Wind, a young man named Armad Wilberforce, with the ability to manipulate the laws of nature, and order Thunder strikes, is drawn into a millennia-old conflict of finding a mysterious man.

But just as he set out to look for this man, his soul is accidentally broken, and a part of it is sent into an unknown land. 

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Disclaimer: cover picture is not mine. My target is a daily release one chapter up to the end of the first book.

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mukkaar
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Really well written story! Its quite unique piece in a good way. It has some irritaing bits, namely that mc seems to be dancing on palm of most characters. 

Looking forward to what happens next :)

gaius maximus
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 The plot is good. the story deals with the mc being a Wilberforce (once a ruler of vast territory and died) and his journey.

The story truly starts from chapter 2. The novel was well written and the world is also perfectly built. 

Carrarn
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The story start's a bit weird but comes around quickly in chapter 1. Although there are some grammar issues, when the story starts to pick up it is easy to forgive them as far as I am concerned.

It has me wondering what will happen and for me, that is a good sign :) I would definitely give it a read if you're into Asian cultivating novels.

Basing my overall score on the story score as the rest isn't low enough for me to influence it.