You're a God, go.

by ScottishWind

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Jason wakes up one day and his reality is shattered. He's dead, so what now? He decides.

Cover art courtesy of ColorGob. Check his DevianArt out.

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Enhoz
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  I won't go into detail with this review,if you want to know something about the story then read it.I'm a simple man.My english ain't the best,nor is my taste in books the best.But this one little fanfiction got me to actually laugh,an action wich i don't do often while reading.This fanfiction is funny,no gramatical error that will make you want to clean your eyes with holy water,OP Mc quite diffrent from any other story.The story....too early to say something about it,but it is quite entertaining up until chapter ''A Furious Guard'' as that is the chapter the fanfiction was up to when i started reading.So guys I made this account some time ago,barely enter it cause to fanfiction is worth the trouble,but i'm a fan of OP Mc,and this fanfiction is awsome but when I look at the realese dates for the chapters it saddens me.Nothing i can do about that.Author i hope you can keep up the good work,i love this fanfiction

Sudra
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The other review is not "lying"

Honestly the only reason I posted this review is to counteract that guy who gave this story half a star for every score. This story simply isn't that bad. Anybody who gave the story a quick readover would realize that it objectively does not deserve the lowest rating for grammar, the same applies to the other scores.

On the other hand… he’s probably right about USERNAME_ALEX being the author.

 

Squad_Fam
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Very good story as of where it is at. Very addicting past the first chapter.

It is a very intelligently written.

The choice of words are very different to the other stories on the website making this one unique

DoubleTriple
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The other review is LYING.

First of all, I do not like to judge people by their preferences, but when one calls the grammar of this novel 'VERY GOOD', then he/she is either the author or the author. (2x is intended.)

Now let us get started on this novel.

Style - Absolute cringe-worthy and trash. The majority of Chapter one consists of sentences with no more than two words, like literally. The way people talk is extremely confusing, so much so that you won't know who the hell is talking to who.

Story - Wishfullment. Some kid turns into God and does whatever he wants. Nuff said. 

Grammar - MOST Definitely not 'Very Good'. Just the synopsis alone is more than enough proof.

Character - Super cringy, bland. When you have characters with only one word in their names such as 'Death' and 'Jason', you know the Characters won't be developed properly, if any at all.

All in all, that overall/grammar score of 4 from the other review is pure bullshit.