Darkworlds : London

by GalenWolf

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity

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Sci-fi horror infests a virtual reality game, but is Darkworlds entertainment - or a ticket to insanity?

Disgruntled, lone-wolf data analyst Adam Harker lives in near-future London where malignant corporations now rule.

Life is so bad for most that they seek to lose themselves in virtual reality games, but Adam is dead set against playing until he's tempted by two quite different people for two wholly different reasons.

In the game, it's 1927 and he's in London battling against the minions of Cthulhu, but then come hints and suggestions that something else stirs, something evil and secret, something new, rising up and replicating itself within the code and taking on the form of ageless evil.

Soon Adam has to fight to save his friends and save his sanity, and maybe even save the world itself, to stop what's inside from breaking its way out


Download Darkworlds London for the first episode in this exciting LitRPG world

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FLAME05
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Absolutely fantastic merge of the game world and it's effects on the real world! High quality and great plot with great grammar and punctuation.  

 

The following wall of text is a rant, opinion and slight spoiler (read on at your own discretion)

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Thats the only big point i can contest and honestly its just an opinion so 4.5 stars :)

Mirrored
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An interesting world that blends litrpgs with lovecraftian horror. 

Held back by the authors unfortuante overuse of exposition. Story would be much better with slow reveals that the characters figure out for themselves.

Way too many creepy figures lurking in the shadows just waiting to jump out and explain things to the MC. 

Author could work on giving weight to the MC's emotions more too. 

 

Zyithe
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So far so good. Please keep on writing. Love the story.