The strange tale of Kali

by Sage71

Original HIATUS Action Fantasy Psychological Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Gender Bender Martial Arts Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural Xianxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

I was a 17 year old, simple guy with a body neither strong or fast just your average with normal problems an normal School life , but a natural event change everything an when I mean natural it means that was cause by the burst of a black hole that take the Lives of all in earth but the strangest thing is it doesn't go to heaven nor hell, even reincarnation dint haven also there wasn't a soul only the consciousness stay what is going on? What haven? why didn't my wish of dying peaceful or be erased was listen? ,an, what are this voices that I am herring?.

 

Follow our protagonist in how he continue in his path to fint his peace that always wanted to have and his strange an bizarre adventures in his new future.

 

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P.S. this is my very first novel be worry of a lot of mistakes in spelling and also the time of updates are going to be in Fridays or weekend, but because I have a life I would possibly drop this to keep going with my life and also if isnĀ“t any problem I'm free  for more material content.

 

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Raphael
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I'm hesitant to even try your novel after reading that description. I suggest you clear that up before you even continue writing because the description is what attracts new readers to try your stories. From what I read from yours I can see you either aren't particularly skilled at English or you don't bother spell checking your writings. Now being mediocre at English isn't a problem in itself, I know several writers here who don't have English as their first language, however those who are trying to get any measure of success have at least an editor who reads their work and fixes mistakes before posting it. Good luck with that. I truly hope this review serves you well and helps you, because that is what it is aimed at not putting you down.