Decide Your Fate Games - R.Malak
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Visit the World of Coroleya, a land of pure magic, mystery, and mythical creatures. Tread the Path of a Hero or become the Villain who seeks glory and power. Battle for your right to exist! Read about its rich history, and enjoy some Fantasy Tales. Welcome to Coroleya. Best of luck and may the suns shine down upon you.
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Hello, my name is GreenFlame. Nice to meet you.
I found myself enthralled by your Choose Your Own Fate/Story Adventure and I really had enjoyed it from the bottom of my heart. It's very simple and easy to follow for those who are not familiar to this classic genre. It brings back a sense of nostalgia when I rented our Choose Your Own Adventure Star Wars books from the public library. Always hit bad endings, but that's what sticky notes are for, right?
You had strong structure and gave your writing a sense of character which I really enjoyed. It added a bit of flair to whatever character your readers had and it was easy for most people to adapt to your imagination to re-process with their own characters. It definitely is making a good example of 'screw the details and run wild' for everyone reading this book.
One last note, I am amazed how indepth you went in constructing this Choose Your Own Adventure Book. You used every bit of mechanic known in Royal Roads Legend to your adventure and I commend you for your wits and cunning. I look forward to your future scenarios, as Moana the Minotaur looks forward in striking rich to save her clan from economical crisis... and hopefully find a good enough groom without her mother putting her into a German Suplex Hold. Yeah, Minotaur culture is very 'unique.'
This is great and I want more!
This is actually very nice and I really enjoyed it so far. Can't wait for the next scenarios!