Decide Your Fate Games - R.Malak

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Visit the World of Coroleya, a land of pure magic, mystery, and mythical creatures. Tread the Path of a Hero or become the Villain who seeks glory and power. Battle for your right to exist! Read about its rich history, and enjoy some Fantasy Tales. Welcome to Coroleya. Best of luck and may the suns shine down upon you.

Artwork from: https://6d6rpg.com/2009/10/13/fantasy-art-barbarian-warrior/

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Index ago
Rules of the Game ago
Choose a Race ago
Dark Mage - Spell Book ago
Fae'lon - Spell Book ago
The Seven Forms of Battle ago
Short Prologue ago
Chapter 1 - Trial Run ago
Trial Run - Choice 1 ago
Trial Run - Choice 2 ago
Trail Run - Choice 3 ago
Trial Run - Choice 4 ago
Trial Run - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 3 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 5 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 6 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 7 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 8 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 9 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 1 - Scenario 10 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 5 ago
Level Up! ago
Trading OutPost ago
MarketPlace ago
Fight in the Arena ago
Intermission ago
Chapter 2 - Scenario 1 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 2 - Scenario 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 2 - Scenario 3 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 2 - Scenario 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 2 - Scenario 5 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 2 - Scenario 6 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 2 - Scenario 7 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 2 - Scenario 8 ago
Contract Broken Bone ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 5 ago
Contract Dark Deeds ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 5 ago
Level Up! ago
Trading OutPost ago
MarketPlace ago
Fight in the Arena 2 ago
Intermission ago
Chapter 3 - Scenario 1 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 3 - Scenario 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 3 - Scenario 3 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 3 - Scenario 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 3 - Scenario 5 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 3 - Scenario 6 ago
Objective - Defend the City (Extreme) ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 5 ago
Objective - Escape the Besieged City (Tough) ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 3 ago
Chapter 3 - Scenario 9 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 3 - Scenario 10 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 5 ago
Level Up! ago
Trading OutPost ago
Finger or Toe ago
Intermission ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 1 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 1 (Edited) ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 3 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 3 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 5 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 5 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 6 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 7 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 6 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 6 - Choice 3 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 7 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 7 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 8 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 8 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 9 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 9 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 4 - Scenario 10 (Edited) ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 5 (Edited) ago
Scenario 10 - Choice 6 (Edited) ago
Level Up! ago
Trading Outpost ago
Battle for the Glory and Honor of the Gods! ago
Intermission ago
Chapter 5 - Scenario 1 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 1 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 5 - Scenario 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 2 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 5 - Scenario 3 ago
Harvester Faction ago
Dragon Guard Faction ago
Fireglass Keeper's Faction ago
Shadow Faction ago
Targestrian Brotherhood Faction ago
Chapter 5 - Scenario 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 4 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 5 - Scenario 5 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 1 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 2 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 3 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 4 ago
Scenario 5 - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 5 - Campaign Begins ago
Campaign Begins - Option 1 ago
Campaign Begins - Option 2 ago
Campaign Begins - Option 3 ago
Campaign Begins - Option 4 ago
Campaign Begins - Option 5 ago
Chapter 5 - Pact of Fire ago
Pact of Fire - Choice 1 ago
Pact of Fire - Choice 2 ago
Pact of Fire - Choice 3 ago
Pact of Fire - Choice 4 ago
Pact of Fire - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 5 - Mountains of Kalswan ago
Mountains of Kalswan - Choice 4 ago
Mountains of Kalswan - Choice 2 ago
Mountains of Kalswan - Choice 3 ago
Mountains of Kalswan - Choice 4 ago
Mountains of Kalswan - Choice 5 ago
Chapter 5 - Champions ago
Champions - Choice 1 ago
Champions - Choice 2 ago
Champions - Choice 3 ago
Champions - Choice 4 ago
Champions - Choice 5 ago
Future Plans ago
Short Story - Blood on the Grass ago
The Beginning: Edge of War - Part 1 ago
The Beginning: Edge of War - Part 2 ago
Warcry - Chapter 1 ago
Warcry - Chapter 2 ago
Warcry - Chapter 3 ago
Warcry - Chapter 4 ago
Warcry - Chapter 5 ago
Warcry - Chapter 6 ago
Warcry - Chapter 7 ago
Warcry - Chapter 8 ago
Warcry - Chapter 9 ago
Warcry - Chapter 10 ago
Warcry - Chapter 11 ago
Warcry - Chapter 12 ago
Warcry - Chapter 13 ago
The Story of Grey Steel ago
Ruins of Tarriel ago
Shadow's Bay ago
Blauztag the Godless ago
Return of Colmar - Part 1 of 2 ago
Return of Colmar - Part 2 of 2 ago
Escape! ago
Prisoners ago
Amaryllis ago
Village of Haldasbre - Part 1 of 2 ago
Village of Haldasbre - Part 2 of 2 ago
Tamrel ago
Darkness - Part 1 of 3 ago
Darkness - Part 2 of 3 ago
Darkness - Part 3 of 3 ago
Citadel Of Fire ago
Fate ago
Battle Preparations Part 1 - 5 ago
Battle Preparations Part 2 - 5 ago
Battle Preparations Part 3 - 5 ago
Battle Preparations Part 4 - 5 ago
Battle Preparations Part 5 - 5 ago
A Citadel on Fire Part 1 - 2 ago
A Citadel on Fire Part 2 - 2 (Big News - Read Note to Readers.) ago
Code of Honor ago
Lost in the Darkness ago
The Witch ago
Light & Dark ago
Epilogue ago
Level Up! ago
Future Plans ago
Dark One ago
Dark One - Choice 1 ago
Dark One - Choice 2 ago
Dark One - Choice 3 ago
Dark One - Choice 4 ago
First Steps ago
First Steps - Choice 1 ago
First Steps - Choice 2 ago
First Steps - Choice 3 ago
First Steps - Choice 4 ago
Commander Karon ago
Commander Karon - Choice 1 ago
Commander Karon - Choice 2 ago
Commander Karon - Choice 3 ago
Commander Karon - Choice 4 ago
Commander Karon - Choice 5 ago
Prologue ago
Scenario 1 ago
Scenario 1 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 1 Choice 2 ago
Scenario 1 Choice 3 ago
Scenario 2 ago
Scenario 2 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 2 Choice 2 ago
Scenario 2 Choice 3 ago
Scenario 2 Choice 4 ago
Scenario 3 ago
Scenario 3 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 3 Choice 2 ago
Scenario 3 Choice 3 ago
Intermission Tragmar ago
Scenario 4 ago
Scenario 4 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 4 Choice 2 ago
Scenario 4 Choice 3 ago
Scenario 5 ago
Scenario 5 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 5 Choice 2 ago
Scenario 5 Choice 3 ago
Scenario 5 Choice 4 ago
Scenario 6 ago
Scenario 6 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 6 Choice 2 ago
Scenario 6 Choice 3 ago
Scenario 7 ago
Scenario 7 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 7 Choice 2 ago
Scenario 7 Choice 3 ago
Scenario 7 Choice 4 ago
Scenario 8 ago
Scenario 8 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 8 Choice 2 ago
Scenario 8 Choice 3 ago
Scenario 9 ago
Scenario 9 Choice 1 ago
Scenario 9 Choice 2 ago
Chapter 5 Part 2 ago
Chapter 6 Part 1 ago
Chapter 6 Part 2 (Slight Addition to Epilogue.) ago

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Keep Calm and Adventure On

Hello, my name is GreenFlame. Nice to meet you.

I found myself enthralled by your Choose Your Own Fate/Story Adventure and I really had enjoyed it from the bottom of my heart. It's very simple and easy to follow for those who are not familiar to this classic genre. It brings back a sense of nostalgia when I rented our Choose Your Own Adventure Star Wars books from the public library. Always hit bad endings, but that's what sticky notes are for, right?

You had strong structure and gave your writing a sense of character which I really enjoyed. It added a bit of flair to whatever character your readers had and it was easy for most people to adapt to your imagination to re-process with their own characters. It definitely is making a good example of 'screw the details and run wild' for everyone reading this book.

One last note, I am amazed how indepth you went in constructing this Choose Your Own Adventure Book. You used every bit of mechanic known in Royal Roads Legend to your adventure and I commend you for your wits and cunning. I look forward to your future scenarios, as Moana the Minotaur looks forward in striking rich to save her clan from economical crisis... and hopefully find a good enough groom without her mother putting her into a German Suplex Hold. Yeah, Minotaur culture is very 'unique.'

Peace

 

zinzukoo
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This is great and I want more!

 

Setskar
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This is actually very nice and I really enjoyed it so far. Can't wait for the next scenarios!