I reincarnated into a bat (20-25 days hiatus)

by dima bajadze

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Non-Human lead Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

His only wish is to find a way to turn back into a human and live a life without regrets.

Book cover artist: Jeko98

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fanobody
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Ok, so CM put 0.5 star to this story with an overall good quality type re:monster because there is an attemp of rape.

I have a problem whit this because:

1. There is the tag

Warning This fiction contains:

  • Gore
  •  
  • Profanity
  •  
  • Sexual Content
  •  
  • Traumatising content

 

2. The guy who try to rape is not the mc, he is an antagonist who is maybe a monster soul, a monster, an amnesic. The mc stop the rape and almost kill him.

 

3. While i do not condone the act of agression, you should not rate so poorly a story because there is an element you don't like. It is like to rate a fanfic 0.5 because it is a fanfic and i don't like fanfic.

 

The litrpg is good so don't let the review discourage you to read it.

darknesck
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Spoiler: Spoiler

 I will read the story and will reserve my review of it.

have a good day

CM
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Spoiler: Spoiler

 If you have any problems with anything in the spoiler tag I'd advise against reading this. 

Otherwise, below mediocre litRPG story, with a interesting plot if you can get past the "R".

The protagonist could sneeze and get a title, the litRPG portion needs to be thought out/fleshed out more. You'll just write yourself into a corner sooner or later at this rate. 

You could remove the litRPG elements entirely and nothing much would change. Perhaps you'll end up with a better story overall. That way you remove the expectations your readers get from this wish fulfilment genre.

The reasons I give this half a star are as following:

Betraying my expectations.

"R" content.

Poor RPG system.

The protagonist.