Master of Jade Cauldron
A youngster was born in the year where the luckiest fate and the inauspicious date clashed together.
In this Continent of Yan, Li Long Feng spend his first ten years growing up as a filial son, trying his best to be enrolled into the Pill Hall to provide a better life for his mother who lost her husband since Long Feng was five.
Unknowing to himself, Long Feng possessed a born innate constitution of Jaded Lingzhi of Knowledge, or also known as the mind of the Emperor of Five Grains, Emperor Shennong.
Notes: I recently returned back to writing. so the chapters might be slightly bad in the first earlier chapters. will return back to the top quality soon.
I have no editors and each chapter is written and edited by myself, hopefully, it's good enough for a good read.
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Story itself is decent, but kindly requesting the author to search an editor to check his chapters before uploading. The grammar makes it hard to continue reading, I know it might not be your first language but that's what editors are for :)
There are some language barrier grammar flubs, but other than this a very readable story
overall story seems good, probably would have given him a 4 on that alone. Biggest issue is it is not his first language and the structure of the original language seems to be very formal. This makes for very diffulcult reading when verbs and adjectives are not where you expect them to be.