Ragnarök Delayed

Ragnarök Delayed

by Mirrond

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After I died I received an offer to be reincarnated in a Fantasy World.

The problem is - I'm not exactly going to be a "hero" of that world, it wasn't really an offer to begin with, and the strange shapeless black entity who gave me that "offer" wasn't really trustworthy... or sane.

Now I am alone in a world that wants me dead. A world I am supposed to ruin as a part of a game I don't understand. I don't even know who plays that game... but it looks like it's a game in which everyone - from pawns to players - is trying to cheat.

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Mature Content Warning - foul language, gore (in the future), potential sex scenes (in the future).

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georgebakerson123
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great premise waiting to be explored

Sorry for the delay. Was reading other stuff lol.

But I truly enjoyed this story. The humour was good, the plot was well thought out and it definitely has potential.

My only gripe, and this is down to personal preference, was that the overabundance of elipses (the '...'s). I understand that this is your own style of writing and others probably wouldn't mind but this is only a minor flaw I find in it.

This shouldn't discourage you, however, and I hope you continue to write this story.

If you go further into the plot, I will do an advanced review. But, for now, this is a placeholder for people to be encouraged to read this novel.

Telvani
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Mighty humour, glorious tale

Well... I've read this piece of art since it's early beginning.

I really liked the plot, the sense of humour, the idea of a person who is lost in the postmortem world in the very unique way.

And I have to said that the "upgraded" 2.0 patch version is the way much more entertaining and is great to read no matter the circumstances.

What is more - the plot is still twisted, characters are well-build and the humour still exist in my favourite state-of-art way.

I keep my fingers crossed for this mighty piece of literature and I just want more.

Keep on rollin' baby.

christopherf
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So, re:v was really well written, of course excluding damnable arc-who-never-existed, which was extremely harmful for the story. If authors are aware about this flaw - I'm 100% sure this novel will be top notch.

I'm expecting professional grammar, likable mc, interesting non-cliche fantasy world, and engaging plot like in re:v. 

Arc posting - I'm not sure it'll work. Few months of waiting, but on the other site well made full arc. I need to see this in work.

 

Obviously rating can go down in the future, but I'm 90% sure this novel will be fully deserving 5 stars. Good luck!