This Kitty has guns
- Sexual Content
- Traumatising content
She was a rich girl with a dark hobby. But the fate has played a cruel joke on her and her life has ended ... or so she thought. What awaits her in this new world, that for some reason resembles a game.
English is not my native language, so if spot mistakes feel free to point them out. It's very much appreciated.
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I'll be honest, there are a few grammatical issues here and there, but nothing that hurts the flow of the story.
I really love this story and I hope you keep it up!
As someone who loves non human MC's I'd say this story is great. Why? Well maybe it's not a masterpiece but I found so much enjoyment from it although it's a simple story.
And the "hidden" tag powercouple is also a nice touch.
As I'm writing this on a phone I won't go into specifics tbh but I should at least touch on the story itself.
The first 30 ish chapters were.. Awesome. But afterwards author probably hit a block and decided to involve divine beings, which was way to early to be honest.
Instead I think the author should have had the MC brought into the political spectrum and built the world and the countries while having the whole Harbinger plot more In the backround rather than the forefront.
Of course that doesn't mean I find the current story bad, just that there is a lot of unused potential right now in the story.
To end the review I could talk about the grammar etc but I honestly don't care. As long as I understand and the dialog isn't like all the characters are cpt obvious/talking like some nearby is blind I'm good!
Anyway good job author and I wish your imagination keeps on flowing ;)
Good book. The first 20-30 chapters were great for me, but then it started to feel stale. It felt like no work went into the character’s growth, and the development got stale. Read it yourself and draw your own opinions.
The mc instantly falls in love with a elf, honestly wheres the logic with it?There's none as far as I see.
I mostly skipped to chapter 19 to see them in a relationship, seeing a beastkin with interesting skills doing nothing interesting is terrible.
If this was rewritten without the annoying elf guy I would like it more.
Sadly I feel this is impossible.