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Comet Storms, Invaders from Space, Zombie Apocalypse, Pandemics, or the Armageddon— Throughout history, humans have imagined all sorts of ways as to how [ The world would end ].
Global warming and dealing with disasters, such as plagues, earthquakes, wars, floods, invasions, murders, droughts, and battles. Some says that all of these could end the world.
Even the 16th century prophet Michel de Nostradame, the very famous Nostradamus, seemed to know how the end of the world was going to come to pass and prophesized.
But reality was proven different.
The world didn’t end with those simple propositions.
In fact, it was completely different. It could even be said to be magical, straight out of fantasy stories.
Yeah. That’s right! Monsters and Beasts, Gods and Demons all of them appeared one after another and caused the world to end.
… And this event marks the beginning of a new era. An era of monsters and demon roaming around the world.
However, these invaders hated humanity and so they tried to extinguish them. Leading Humanity to fight for their survival!
Allen Bando, the world’s most wanted criminal; [ The Black Demon King ] joined the [ Dawn Alliance ] to fight but failed in the end.
Now that he was given a second chance, what calamity would he brought in his return… ?
Allen: I have seen my land change with my own eyes and watched the masses brought to their knees.
Even though I died, I have not regretted what I have done, but what I have not done.
The world change and my comrades betrayed me but in this second life, I will not lose.
World, bring it on!
You want to see me fail but not today motherf*cker! This world has every odd against me but I will stand my ground because this world should remain mine forever.
Many are torn apart but I am a Man!
I will stand with my heart on my sleeve.
I will kneel nor bow to no one!!
World, for the second time around, here I come!!
Hello guys, I tried changing the sypnosis as one of the reader's wanted. But I don't have any talent in writing one so, I hope this time would be good.
For your information, English is not my native tongue and I admit that I have very bad grades in my english class, so if there's any error in my grammar then I apologize...
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current as of chapter 90
So, let's get this review out of the way. Story started out a bit cliche. But that's just me. I read a lot.
Style: You started out great. The whole apocalypse thing is neat. Other than that, kinda lacking. It just seems so..........ordinary. More in story.
Story: Here we go. Mc gets betrayed by his friends. I've seen that before. A lot. What I haven't seen tho, is that they have no reason for it. I'm on chapter 90 and it has not been shown why they betrayed him. Just did it I guess cause they got bored??? Your story started out as a great LN, but at like chapter 15 or something, slowly started to drift to a typical Chinese wuxia format. What I mean is--- Mc is not OP from start. He fights a few lvl 1 enemies, struggles but gets it done. Mc gains some power. Here comes a lvl 3 enemy. Mc beats it with difficulties. Cool but, from this point on, there are no more lvl 1 enemies. It's all lvl 3 and up. He fights a lvl 5,no more lvl 3s show up. So on and so on. Also following the Chinese wuxia guidelines, the women. Oh my god, they grow on trees. They are popping out everywhere. And they all love Allen. Why?? Cause he strong!! It's never explained why he keeps his super rare skill equip either. Just does. That and, everyone has equip. Like everyone. How is it rare, if everyone has it??
Grammar: Meh, I've seen worse. But it's still kinda bad. Gets worse as your story progresses. Wrong tense, past and present get messed up a lot. Other than that, great going bro.
Character: The bane of your existence. Took you around 40 chapters to notice the people complaining about lack of description, after which you kept it minimal. Oh well. One last thing. Mia. How does she work?? Her father is an Italian mafia dude. Cool. Her mother is a Japanese chick. Cool. Both countries have a majority that have brown hair and brown eyes. How do you get blond hair blue eyed girl from that mix??? That has been bugging me for the longest time. Did they mother sleep around with someone else?? Or did the father?? Please explain. Especially since every time Mia shows up, you first describe her with blond hair blue eyes.
So yeh, long review. Story is kinda starting to drop in quality. Also, your foreshadowing is horrid. At this point, I am convinced that Allen is the demon king. Great story tho, keep up the great work.
P.S. who names their philipino kid Allen???
****Chapter 101 Update Review*****
Welp, it's gone. The story has died. Started out great, but over time, has become a chore to read. From too many exclamation marks ( every other sentence, really) to chapters about people talking ( 4 back to back about 2 chicks talking about Allen. Dear god). You have slowed down your story too much. Should have focused on quality instead of quantity in this case.
It has been a good story ( first 40 chapters at least) but it's time I dropped it. Don't let this review discourage you and keep on trucking ahead at your own pace, because at the end of the day, this is still your story. Good luck.
This is..... A wasted opportunity.
It started out pretty solid, then it went into masturbatory Self indulgence
I suffered through 71 chapters of this and it was halfway decent not remarkable but it goes through every sin that a harem novel usually goes through.
- Mc faces no challenges
- Girls have no personality
- Mc doesnt even seem to care about the girls
- Novel drowns on and on about how op he is even though he basically killed himself in his last world/parallel dimension because he wasn't strong enough.
- No mermorable characters. They just become paper fodder.
- No good main villian.Everything he comes across he beats easily
- Mc is an emotionless prick
- Mc is a hypocrite trying to be edgy and then fawn over female he meets.(some are even monsters that he would kill without a second thought if they were male)
- Everyone else can't even match him in power even though alot of being are supposed to be alot stronger than him and even if they are they are all female and are added to his harem.
Again the setting is not the worst out there it just the authors execution of the plot and characters was garbage.
Pretty average novel with an op mc which was going fine until the author kills off the mc for no good reason and has the "main" personality come out (which was never hinted at).
killing off mc bad ape brain no like
Story started out great, Main Character was strong but not OP, he used smarts to beat foes stronger than himself without any random power ups letting him suddenly over power a foe.
However after leaving the school things start going a bit sideways, he gets some stuff, awesome some fun equipment for him to use, but now he's suddenly one shotting lvl 3 creatures. Oh now he has lightning powers where he can wipe out a lvl 5 without issue. And from there on it just gets worse, the writing gets cliche with no effort at all at being original.
I was super excited when I first picked this story up because it was creative even if I have read others like it. Now? It feels like I'm just reading about how the MC is stronger than everyone else for no reason.
In one chapter he was insistant on keeping his sniper rifle to the point he almost fought some soldiers, about two chapters later the sniper is never mentioned again and it's all about his super OP lightning powers.
Fighting the dragon he went to his limit in his first attack, then suddenly he was able to pull energy out of no where to go even higher, and then he drank a health potion to go even higher, and later it was specifically stated HP only heal injuries they don't relieve fatigue or stamina.
I hate to say it but this story has just turned into lazy writing for the sake of writing, those that enjoy it good on you keep going, but personally? I think this has turned into a cliche train wreck.
started strong and interesting but from chapter 85+ it is just not that interesting anymore, I don't exactly know what it is, but there is just so much "empty" text, I skipped almost all of the chapters 95-97.
I guess all the talk about how the characters feel and how the mc is changing is just boring.
It is just too much talking about feelings instead of showing it through actions.
It's not even real talking most of it is kind of an inner monologue or a godlike view into the character's mind "he feels more and more like..."
The cool abilities and new experiences from the beginning were somewhat lost and replaced with lots and lots of self-doubt of the future. Is not like I think this unrealistic for the situation it is just not interesting.
It started really well but MC's personality just jumps left and right, some times he's ruthless others he behaves like a Japanese MC.
There are several nonsensical actions, for example, MC gets a item that provides bonuses for combat abilities, but he gives it to the basically useless side chick, mind you this is on the beginning of the novel so MC is basically walking around naked but he still gives it away for no reason other than hurr you're my friend I want you to be safe, even tho the pants don't even give a significant increase in defense since it's a offence ability bonus. This coming from a person that suvived into the apocalypse for a long time and should be experienced is completely illogical.
The romance is also half-assed, MC returns back in time, he suddenly hugs his teacher because of her actions before he died, she is startled and tries to make him stop but after a while she gives in becomes flustered and outta nowhere now the teacher loves him. What the fuck? Around a chapter later the same thing happens again, he saves a girl, bandage her arm now she's in love with him too, hello?
All in all it had some potential, not original mind you, it's another generic apocalypse novel, but was horribly executed.
I Really love this novel early i really do and when i reach around chapter 170+ I has to stop somehow the plot that i hate the most just show up mc with multi personalities i mean author write about the "first" allen past 170+ chapter and out of no where the original allen show up and replace the "first" allen i mean the "first" guy are go through so many shit getting back stab also death and comeback in time to suffer again and now he even his existence are just gone
If you gonna do something like this you should say or hint something at the start of the story this just some next level bullshit
well i'm out
as of chapter 425. I have lost track of anything that could be regarded as character development. *Spoilers ahead.* mc abandons all previous love interests and goes to a new realm, but later we learn that his clone is still on earth; however nothing involving earth matters anymore, so all previous character development is moot. mc doesnt develop anymore, he does get new abilites and he does go new places, and mee new love interests, but aside from the initial meeting, none of them show up again. the plot has a relevent chap once in every ten, mabe. mc reacts the same to all female boss monsters and all fm bosses react the same in return. author is fond of plot twists, but when you cant tell what is plot and what isnt relevent to furthuring the story, you just have possible sub plots that dont really matter, or have any connection to the main plot (if you can find it or still remember what it is).
It Started with a nice plot and I loved it...But now the author is just breaking the 4th wall...I mean I don't know the complete myth of dante and solomon but I am damn suremost of the plot is Bulls**t....I would only say that the author ran out of plots and started to make some gibberish plot......And he even made the MC a gigollo.........who will do anyone anywhere anytime, the only restriction is that it should be a FEMALE....He is even ready to F**k a bich who literally caused his death.....The author is a pigheaded moron.....