Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Psychological LitRPG Magic Male Lead Strong Lead Supernatural
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With overpowering might and some of the most powerful spells, how will he proceed?

 

 

My First Story

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So I don't usually do reveiws but I felt I should for this one

The story progresses nicely but Mc lacks depth there is room for improvement but I like what you got.

Do work on character development and seriously add some romance for me pls I'll edit this later hope it helps motivate you but again I don't write reviews and my reviews aren't  really good non the less I would recommend this novel as it has potential good luck author.