I Swear my Brother's the Protagonist of a BL Manga

by ashiou

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Hello. Hashiwara Mitsuko speaking. I'm 16, a virgo, blood type O, and my favourite dish is stir-fried tomato and eggs. I have two loving (if a bit slow) parents, both in their mid-forties. I also have a twin brother, Mitsuo, blood type B, airhead extraordinaire and oblivious gay magnet.

Yeah. You heard that right. Hordes of guys drool over his ass each day, and it's my job to make sure scum like them don't manage to get close enough to contaminate him.

Anyway, somehow, we've been picked up and dumped in another world. A world filled with swords, magic, dragons and all that jazz.

You're f*cking kidding me, right? I've gotta deal with S-class heroes, demon kings and other super powerful beings lusting after my brother now?!

Haaah... Bring it on then! I'll beat you all so hard your great great great great grandparents will feel it!

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Gingerghostflewby
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Definitely one of the best books I've ever read.  Very well written, with flawless grammer and great style and pace.  Characters are super interesting, and even the first few chapters are filled with enough humor to make me laugh out loud more than once.  I highly recommend this book and the unique twist it puts on a BL transmigration story.  Author-sama, I'm begging you, please continue writing this!  It is too cruel to hook us like this and leave us hanging!

ILovePancakes
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Weird, quirky and filled with gags. Quite well written. Haven't gone far in terms of plot so I can't comment on that, but promising!

WhyIsItCloudy
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There are some books with an interesting plot line, and others where the author's writing style captivates the reader. From what I've seen so far, this has a bit of both. I can almost sense the havoc the twins will wreck. Very very good potential.

I suggest adding a bit more detail into the surroundings and the people or smth, because the world bulding is a bit lack and I feel like the characters live in a very small and enclosed world, as there is little details to other things.

Ahhh, will our dear Mc finally grow to become the protagonist of her own story? Will she become her own person, rather than just her brother's keeper??

I really look forward to her making friends and expanding her world outwards to not revolve around her bro. Maybe the occasional wholesome sibling moment. AHH, also her becoming op, *spoiler*

 

even though her brother seems to have more potential and being more shiney, I want her to have her own adventures without her bro and maybe, just maybe the brother could also grow up a little. (Alsooo looking forward to that)

ZhaneSilverman
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Hilarious story so far.  :)  Really hope you continue it and we get to see more of the world they ended up in and how Mitsuko will protect her brother. 

silvananoir
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I would highly recommend this for fans of BL. If this is you and you've read Japanese and Chinese Light Novels than this is something that you'll enjoy. THe main character is a really funny observer to the typical harem mindset. The writing is good as well. It's pretty early in the story as I'm writing this but I've enjoyed what I've read so far.