Lucy Wickshire (warning: sexual content)

Lucy Wickshire (warning: sexual content)

by Mfonemana Uduak

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

 You are about to read the accounts of Lucy Torgenn of Wickshire and the millions of bodies burned as backdrop to her rage... 

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Chapter nine (5) (Warning: sexual content) ago
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Media in Sanity
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What you waiting for? Go read it!

Entertaining, mysterious and with plenty of content already. It has the most entertaining female lead I've seen in RRL.

There's no reason not to check it out!

God_is_Good
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Absolutely wonderful, a must-read

I truly loved this story.  I'm not quite finished with it yet, but what I have read has hooked me so well, and this one is definitely going on my bookshelf.

Style score:  Your voice is incredibly strong, and it really draws me in.  You have vivid descriptions and put us right there on the scene.  I feel the moment so strongly, and you have such wonderful emotions and depth to everything that has happened.  Your voice is very smooth, it flows really well, I can hear it as if there's someone reading it to me.  Your word choices are really, really good, although they can be kind of repetative.  

Grammar score:  This needs a little more work.  Your grammer is very flawed in some parts, especially in terms of capitalization after dialogue.  A little editing should do the trick, though.  :)

Character Score:  Your chatacters are amazing.  Lucy is so well written and rounded out, I feel like I really relate to her, almost.  She really captivates me, you make it so that I can put myself in her shoes so well.  She sees the world in such an amazing, unique way, and it really facinates me.  Wow.

Overall, I'm giving this four and a half stars, which is a lot more than I'm used to giving.  Wonderful work!

Sereminar
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Extremely well written story. Classic mideaval politics with a coniving lady and her rather competent servants. 

The pov shifts are done clearly and with purpose always keeping the reader in on the action. Allowing the reader to follow the instructions without much difficulty.

It's definitely worth checking out! 

TheEpicLotfi
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I was about to drop it at some point (non-magic stories aren't my cup of tea), but I noticed the author's name and location and surmised that she was African. 

That really excited me since I barely see any other African on this website (Kenyan, here), and especially a content creator. Good on you, Mfonemana! Show them our literary skills!

I'd like if you could download Grammarly as a google extension. It would help immensely with spellchecking and basic grammar checks, and it'll get you used to write with good grammar.

Then again, this review might come at a time when you have improved (I've only read up to book 1), but I'll make sure to continue reading and update the review one day (maybe never, but we shall see).

Until then, keep writing and develop. You've got decent skills as it is.