The pale dungeon (dropped)
Dungeons: environments rich in magic and rare creatures. It could be said that a dungeon is alive and somewhat sentient. It can aid the creatures within itself and order them around to some degree. The creatures and plants within a dungeon determines its intelligence and power. Most dungeons alter its inhabitants to achive greater power and intelligence as they evolve, but some have the ability to claim creatures from the outside that find their way into the dungeon if the right conditions are met.
So what happens when a young werewolf lands in its grasp?
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Rather than starting at a dungeons formation this story starts at it's upheaval, most of the story and characters are introduced at the moment their entire life gets flipped around. This sense of chaos is woven into the humor and into the dark moments which less to a lot of enjoyable moments. Everyone is trying to be a normal as they can be while going through the most abnormal changes, people becoming monsters, monsters becoming people and a dungeon basically becoming a meddlesome but fun mother to them all.
Brilliant! I love the characters, and I get a 'misfit family' vibe from the story in its current state. The main character's internal conflict over their new state of being, without being drawn out is very well done.
Not really what we expect from a dungeon story, but it is way better. With a different POV than the classic dungeon story, this is really great!
The story is an interesting twist of the dungeon style. It doesn't focus on the blue screens yet still makes the rpg style of it seem real. I don't know whether to call this story dark or light hearted, however I do know that this is a great story in the making.
The only thing needed from what I can tell is that there are a few grammatical errors that need changing, then this story would have no flaws! First time I've ever said that!
it not like your other dungeon story and the way it work is quite difference,too (small spoiler:simply because this is focus in that werewolf girl when she is live in that dungeon,and connected to that dungeon) ,the story is quite dark ,but for some reason I feel it have atmosphere of "everyone like large chess" here ? :v,right now there are not much chapter so I will edit later