The pale dungeon (dropped)

by Vuliy

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Dungeons: environments rich in magic and rare creatures. It could be said that a dungeon is alive and somewhat sentient. It can aid the creatures within itself and order them around to some degree. The creatures and plants within a dungeon determines its intelligence and power. Most dungeons alter its inhabitants to achive greater power and intelligence as they evolve, but some have the ability to claim creatures from the outside that find their way into the dungeon if the right conditions are met.

So what happens when a young werewolf lands in its grasp?

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Ch1 First transformation ago
Ch2 Wounds and Words ago
Ch3 Hands? Hands. ago
Ch4 First kill ago
Ch5 Guilt ago
Ch6 Bloody nightmare, bloody clovers. ago
Ch7 Introductions ago
Ch8 Intruders ago
Ch9 Maker shouldn't swear ago
Ch10 Wolves and Bansheep ago
Ch11 Cute fuzzy rodents ago
Ch12 Annoying sassy rodents ago
Ch13 Too many eyes ago
Ch14 Too many ears ago
Ch15 Forest adventures ago
Ch16 Forest Guardian ago
Ch17 Queen of rats ago
Ch18 The Afterlife ago
Ch19 Rumours and spirits ago
Ch20 Nightly adventures ago
SCh1 Raging rivers ago
Ch21 Travelers ago
Ch22 Chair of friendship ago
Ch23 Dance-offs can be lethal ago
Ch24 The importance of names ago
Ch25 Red guts ago
Ch26 ...Slimy ago
Ch27 Sticky situation ago
Ch28 Moonlight meeting ago
Ch29 Audience with the Maker ago
Ch30 Moonmad ago
Ch31 Murder in the woods ago
Ch32 Mama wolf ago
Ch33 Lovely, murderous, children ago
Ch34 The bees! ago
Ch35 Music ago
Ch36 Cultist cats ago
SCh2 The deaf girl and the sirens ago
Ch37 Magic is as complicated as words are ago
Ch38 Moon Cave ago
SCh3 The Love of Death lasts Forever ago
Ch39 We come in peace ago
Ch40 Dessi and Krystal, masters of smooth-talking ago
Ch41 Just Bird Things ago
Ch42 They grow up so fast ago
Ch43 Greetings humans! ago
Ch44 Back to the road ago
Update, not a chapter ago
A very very late update. Novel dropped ago

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Oninomad
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A beautifully dysfunctional dungeon

Rather than starting at a dungeons formation this story starts at it's upheaval, most of the story and characters are introduced at the moment their entire life gets flipped around. This sense of chaos is woven into the humor and into the dark moments which less to a lot of enjoyable moments. Everyone is trying to be a normal as they can be while going through the most abnormal changes, people becoming monsters, monsters becoming people and a dungeon basically becoming a meddlesome but fun mother to them all.

hydrobendy
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I cried out "Nooo!" when I finished reading

Brilliant! I love the characters, and I get a 'misfit family' vibe from the story in its current state. The main character's internal conflict over their new state of being, without being drawn out is very well done. 

marmotte
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A new taste of dungeon!

Not really what we expect from a dungeon story, but it is way better. With a different POV than the classic dungeon story, this is really great!

Kaellom
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You've got me addicted, now give me my fix!

The story is an interesting twist of the dungeon style. It doesn't focus on the blue screens yet still makes the rpg style of it seem real. I don't know whether to call this story dark or light hearted, however I do know that this is a great story in the making.

The only thing needed from what I can tell is that there are a few grammatical errors that need changing, then this story would have no flaws! First time I've ever said that!

royaldarknes
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a very interesing dungeon story

it not like your other dungeon story and the way it work is quite difference,too (small spoiler:simply because this is focus in that werewolf girl when she is live in that dungeon,and connected to that dungeon) ,the story is quite dark ,but for some reason I feel it have atmosphere of "everyone like large chess" here ? :v,right now there are not much chapter so I will edit later