World of Tala

World of Tala

by chaos234

Warning This fiction contains:
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A man named Jasper Perez was riding a public utility vehicle on his way home when he saw a strange humaniod creature following the vehicle's tracks. He immediately called his friends attention and pointed to that strange humaniod creature but his friend said that there's nothing there. Few seconds later, someone screamed at the front gathering the attention of all the passengers inside. There he saw the strange humaniod once more, it slowly raise it's hand and a giant worm appeared behind it then the worm devoured the vehicle whole. At that time, he thought that he was going to die but a sudden light envelops his body followed by a strong wave of drowsiness making him fell asleep. The next time he opened his eyes, he's in the middle of an unfamiliar forest.

 

This is the story of Jasper Perez, a man got transported to another world trying to go back home.

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It isn't good enough for a 5 star but a two star is way too low for a novel that only seems to have grammar issues, that is just screwing an author out of possible fans and readers out of something they might like.