The Puppeteer (dropped)

by FicFanatic

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Martial Arts Virtual Reality
This FF isnt about someone poor who lost his family and needs to live off a VR game. Malcolm Brim is the son of the CEO of Virtual Works, who developed and pioneered Virtual reality tech two years ago and released the first game Second Life. Though the restiction of 18 years or older kept him from the game his father helped provide, after completeing his 18th birthday the first thing he does is jump in and go after his dream... Puppeteering?

Follow his adventure as he fights not only monsters but others people out to steal what he discovered
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Grimm
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i think it`is really interesting hope you keep it up want to know how the story progress

Nonperson
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interesting but sadly TOO OP

at first the storyline seems interesting but slowly the character development began going OP it doesnt feel like VRMMORPG anymore just like a lone player playing RPG alone with no regard to other player the story doesnt have enough conversation/interaction between player which is the core of VRMMO story its just reading book with only one possible ending too bad

TruthHut
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good story idea, if somewhat flawed execution. Needs some major edits with grammar and OP character.

Flodust
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I always love crafting stories with a lot detailed box windows. Keep this up.

zecran25
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wow what a kind ff pls update more in this fanfic

Luffyz
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Love it <3 Can't wait for new chapter !                                                                                       

wvskull
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Don't you dare to stop updating this ff!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  

Fixpear
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Like the story very much the MC is one of a kind and I like that very much on FF. Keep up the good work, hope u continue  to write it out. 

 

 

Ps. Is your RE: still ongoing? 

Sedahodis
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Very interesting story, I cant wait for new chapter. :D

wsensor
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Really interesting story.

I really like this story. It is interesting and different from others at the same time.

Can't wait to read some more.

 

(My friends mad he was thinking of a similar type story setting with golems and stuff like this. He saw this and got sad. It was for a d&d type game though.)