God Slayer

by KSY

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Vol.1 of God slayer series is available on Amazon. You can read it for free if you have subscribed for kindle unlimited or have prime membership. Kindly leave comments. it will help me a lot. 

link:-http://royalroadl.com/amazon/B06XKW8FST

(Since Vol.1 of God slayer series is  enrolled in KDP select program of amazon due to which i can only post 10% of the story on other websites.)

Synopsis :- A contract killer reincarnates into a foreign world. In his new life, he learns the meaning of family and love.  He had already decided to obtain the power to make sure that he didn’t face the same predicament as in his former life and keep his loved ones safe from all sorts of harm. He wished to become the master of his own destiny. "

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vikramhire007
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nice start,good plot and good writing

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

I like the story with martial spirits anyway good job keep continuing

Kuruto_desu
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What happened ? why is it gone :(

I liked this story hope you can send us a link where we can read it i still havent finish reading it

Ferario
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Rewrite? I wanted to see the next chapter... :(

oyy, where'd you go? All of the chapters are missing. Are you doing a rewrite or something? ~_~

99Bigbear
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Loved the first book on Amazon. The character is ruthless to his enemies but a strong defender of his friends. I think it classifies as chaotic good/antihero. But would like an update every now and then to know if we have to wait a while for the next chapter or just to know if the author has writers block.

Mrcookies
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Just finished book 3 it was great but the hole book seems like lead up for book4 can’t wait

Nickg1980
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One of my favorite stories. The third book I think is the best yet. The only complaint I could make (and it is a small one) it seems that every beast, demon, and devil are the strongest of their type.

Haroon
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Great book😀

But does anyone know when book three is starting?

 

Kasi
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Really enjoyable even though a bit rough around the edges

After buying your book God Slayer: Vol 1 and reading it in one day i have to say in gerneral i really enjoy your story. You seem to deviate away from the "all time under dog" by not being afraid to give your main character some back ground, which he can use as help or leverage. This makes the novel different in the way that the MC is not so much dependend on luck due to him having instead resources he can use.

My problem with the Novels are more some minor issues i have with your writing style. I am no native speaker but the abundant use of "jumped by leaps and bounds" even got noticed by me. Your general writing style also seems to be a bit rough around and the edges and you should try to handle info dumps better. Your first 2 chapter esp the explanation of all the realms and levels made me want to bash my head against the wall not because it was badly writing but simply a chain of 5?-7 pages full of info dump. Never the less i really enjoyed your novel especially the powers you chose to give your MC and will eager await the release of volume 2, which will be an insta buy for me. 

BBZ
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Where is number 4?

Reviewed at: Ch.1

I love a hero that’s smart and not just lucky.  I really hope there is a fourth book.  I’m starting to worry that the series has been abandoned since none of the others took this long. That would be really sad because out of the many (and I mean MANY) books of this type that I’ve read this series is truly unique.

Albyihat
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Good story but needs tons of work

One word. Proofreading. Do it! Good story but dang man take some pride in your work, and edit it a bit.