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The death of an old dwarf, the reincarnation of an old soul into a dungeon. He was expecting a peacefull, lonely death, and now he is a dungeon. Well, it could be worse, after all, dwarves are at home underground. Now he has to re-discover how to survive in this new life. He and his creations must carve out their place in the world with their own hands. 


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Sourcream24
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Love it 

Unique story

 Unlike the animal loving dungeon that hates intellegent monster and the other dungeon that hates killing i'll leave that to you guys if you know what im talking about 

 

Keep it up

ThanatosZeta
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This story possesses some of the tropes common in dungeon narratives. However, it falls short in the little things. The characters are one dimensional and the author does not adequately express why they are doing the things they're doing. Second, the spelling and grammar detract heavily from immersion. The author uses many of the same phrases despite supposedly changing point of views between characters. Finally, I felt little of the excitement that I felt for others of the genre such as Slime Dungeon and Unbound Dungeon. The author needs to do some heavy editing. 

_-Paris-_
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Good Story with it's Strong Points as example the unique way of creating the Creatures and the detail given to the Dungeon's look . But thats also a wekness of this story because it is to focused on the Dungeon's look . The Next Flaw is thet the Mc ' s aren't expanding , next to that it has a lot of skill's that could be simplified .

It is a good story that is not to long but has somethings to be left desired .

Sandsforever
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I enjoyed  the first vol decent story hoped he continue oh well

Tanhalevi
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Truly worth of love ... And of such  a high rating.

Montizuma59
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One of the best dungeon stories I read

The grammer is good, the plot is intresting, the dungeon is growing in an intresting way and the characters show clear signs of growth. I recommend whoever has doubts about reading this to just try to and I am sure that you'll get hooked.

CLE9595
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This is a really easy to read story , the concept of haveing no body is pretty nice

If there's a things i feels lacking because this type of stories could really do it is implementing more strategy to it , he is a commander after all a MC strategy like would be so much fun x) ( even tho i like the way you write and the story is well representated ) 

9/10

DAngeL74
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Awful grammar coupled with lack of editing. Some sentences have repeating words and the same word can be used three times in row. Characters except the dungeon and few overs feel like all they are for is to spout exposition. Dropped at chapter 20.

Mister J.A
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Great dungeon novel among the best even. I say among the best because I don't know how many novel of this kind I have read otherwise I would have simply said that it's the best. If it was slightly better it would have won a place among my favorites.