Unhappy Company

Unhappy Company

by asphaltus

Are you unhappy?

If so, call us.

The Company (established 1849) offers specialized solutions for everyone that guarantees 100% happiness*, ensures well-being, and promotes a healthier outlook on life. With over 1000 successful cases and operational branches in 34 countries, the Company is the best organization* in business in the field of happiness!

With the help of our trusted advisors, you can rid of your negativity*, ranging from annoyance, discontentment, unhappiness, sorrow, grief, and much more! So what are you waiting for?

Call us now, and be happy!

1-800-NOT-HAPPY!

Happiness is now just a phone call away!

*Terms and conditions apply. The legal definitions may vary wildly.
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Nice cover good premise

Nice cover, good premise. Could use some character development, but nice twist so far. Also its been like, 3 chapters so imma let lack of character dev slide this time.

Only a tentative review, i'll update when there's a lot more chappies up. Also, wow, love works in mysterious ways, huh.