New: The Dark Inheritor

by MorphsuitAmerica

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

A princess should live her life as a princess, right? Sadly, this is not that story. Oppressed by her father under a sheltered life, a princess is trapped in her cage, yearning for escape. With untapped potential, a strong desire for freedom and exploration, and a hidden fate, she rots behind ignorance. Unknowningly, destined for greatness, a scheme happens behind the scene. One day, a mysterious woman grants her the perk "Defeat Inheritor." From that day onwards, Aisha begins her new life filled with freedom and danger. Corrupted by a madwoman, praised by geniuses, champion of a crazy entity, Aisha travels the vast world of Aelea. Watch this young innocent, ignorant princess bloom into a dignified and fearsome queen. As she ventures forward, she discovers a wider view on the world she was kept away from. She will tackle the hardships and situations that will block her advance. Not knowing how to love, she starts her own harem (unexpectedly). 

 

This story is influenced by The Coiling Dragon and Re:Monster. I added some mix into this, revealing some other components that blends fantasy with numerous things.

 

Rating: M 18+ Strong language, graphic content, sexual content, and blood and gore. There will be a lot of lesbian (yuri) scenes. And the cover picture is my own work. I created it.

 

Note: This will be the revamped version of the story, the old one can be found here:

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/4699

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Even better than the original.

Style: I like the style of this writing more, I think.

Story: The same as I said in the original story, the world building has me hooked. The additional expansion on the characters and plot has me hooked even more.

Grammar: Near perfect.

Character: The characters are back and better than ever. They have much more fleshed out motivations and are a lot more engaging than before.