The curse of eternity

The curse of eternity

by Blanlita

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  • Traumatising content

Alice Leno, a girl who prioritises efficiency above all else. Due to an unexpected encounter with God, she became the embodiment of time, granting her immortality and control over time itself. She takes it as a blessing, but is that really the case?

 


Note: Completely amateur writer. I'm simply doing this just for the heck and fun of it. Any problems should be pointed out, constructive criticism is also welcome, just not too overboard. 

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