Infected Life

by coldfire142

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Sci-fi Female Lead Gender Bender Non-Human lead Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Humanity died 500,000 years ago to it's own hubris, the search for Immortality. One Human is revived through alien technology as a political ploy. This lone former Human must decide whether to die off for good or survive through new and strange body functions, assassination attempts, political intrigue, and war. A whole galaxy is open to explore or die in.

 

This lone human infected with man’s Hubris is alone no longer.

 

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+Mature warning+  there will be sex, so 18+ is advised.

I make no claim on the picture used as cover. The picture is Temporary tell i have an artist draw me one.

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RadKat
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Worth the read, and hope for much much more

I rarely, if ever, type a review on sites like these, but the few stories that do get my attention are a really good treat. There are only three chapter, including the prologue, at the time of this writing.

The chapters are long, and easy to read. The wording isn't bad, and the characters are likeable.

It has a bit of a fast pace to it, but not too fast. It's right in tht middle area where it could go either way. Whether it speeds up or goes slower, the way the story is being told is just right for this speed.

The only real Con i can think of at this point isn't even a real Con for it. The time frame, and number of chapters is too small for it to be an issue. This con is basically the time characters on in a scene. Just long enough for you to get there personality, and either like them, or like them.

Lol, This story is really good so far, and I for one hope for much much more. It's a gem already, and it's just starting.

MadJestAA
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Great read, the story itself is fun and easy to read. It's well written and thought out. I recommend it !

GriefTG
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A good story but not without some small flaws

When I was first readig this I was shocked at how high quality it was compared to other stories and I continue to have high hopes for it in the future.

My first praise is the plot; alot of authors on this site tend to just throw the main character into a new situation or most of the time quite litterally a whole new world but they don't have a fleshed out plot or its over used and clitche. This novel does not do that, while the start is more of a info dump but still well executed in setting up the pre-plot, its only from the second chapter onwards that you get the real problem and situation. and it should be that way you need at least one or two chapters to set up a story so the action doesn't seem rushed. However if I had any complaints it would be the tone of the first chapter do not match the following ones. chapter 1 is very bleak and hopless while the following chapters are more of a slice-of-life. I believe it should have had a much smoother transtition between tones. Characters are at a 50/50 for me while yes you have set them up with an excellente background and emotions they lack the real depth to convay those emotions in character. An example of what im talking about is while they do seem like real people their motivation is blurry, sure you could explain it by them having total devotion to a human. Lets me ask you this then what would happen if a more "complete" human showed up? Would most of them besides his mother show any loyalty or affection for him/her? From what I have understood the robots affection and love of him stems directly from the fact that he is a revived human and that they would not care about him nearly as much if he was a simple robot.

kydomos
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The story is amazing the chapters are long, they are very well written,and it got me loving after only 3 chapters.

P.s. this is only my second time reviewing a story so basically what I am saying is read it you won't regret it.

sylvester272
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1 of the best sci-fi fic's of RR, it is a must read

daredark
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Another great one has left the building

I am really getting angry, after a long time this story appears and i loved it. I mean this story is almost flawless almost.

The reason i am angry is because all the stories that are posted nowadays on this site are no longer then 4 to 10 chapters and after that the author has no more interest in it. well i would like it for this site to put a limit for 50 to a 100 chapters minimum if you want to post a story.

Grz daredark

P.S. I hope you will get back author-sama, pls i need you.

Winter_Crows
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Not what you want but what you need

Ok so to be honest I'm most likely the worst person to ask about style scores as I'll read just about anything that falls my way. As long as it's not to hard on the eyes and is in english I'll read it (can only read english my one weakness!!!). Not saying that this story has terrible style I'm just saying be your own judge and read the first paragraph of the first chapter.

 

this extends to grammar, so many stories on Royalroadl have ruined my ability to proof read so i won't notice grammar or spelling mistakes unless they're pretty major and I have yet to see any so all good there.

 

The story is one of my favorites so far and I was quite depressed with the thoughts of this story ending at 4 chapters, like there were man tears present kind of depressed. 

 

Character wise it's good, making up whole races even with the power of google search "aliens" isn't that easy. Now while the Mc is on shaky ground and Author stabilizes where the MC is heading i'll have to edit and update the Character Score to a full 5 or a full 4 (Don't make me Author I swear I'm crazy I'll do it)

Overall just go read the story and get addicted already

 

p.s there is some sex so if your uncomfortable with sex.........f**k it I'm sure everyone that reads these novels online are all mature people that know the internet is full of dark and sexual terms....right? don't want anyone to get blindsided by reality and have your misconception of the internet die a horrible death

recalcitrant
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Truly a story spanning light years and eons....

For me, this is one of those stories that you always wished existed- but never found. So, imagine my surprise when I stumbled upon Infected Life- a science fiction that encompasses hundreds of thousands of years- literal 'ages'- with biologically engineered OP immortal characters, something which I have always dreamed of reading!!! And while this tale specifically caters to several of my personal tastes as to what a 'true' sci-fi story should be like, I feel like this would satisfy any reader even remotely interested in the sci-fi genre as a whole.

( Really hope this story survives the Author's trials of patience and perseverance, and shrugs off the trappings of mortality (HIATUS) )

CherShootX
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THE BEST NOVEL I EVER READ ON ROYALROADL

The storyline is very good, it has a very smooth progress on the story that wasn't too fast and too slow.

The backround story is pretty interesting, with human extinct and he... I mean she became the last human alive.

The most that i like in this novel is that this novel resemble a bit of kingdom building and i like that it was about space, which is my dream to explore space and it kinds of remind me of stellaris.

The only problem on this novel is that the amount of chapter is lacking and it seems the author already not continuing it for a while? I guess?

Well i hope the author keep making the novel

Zachapooh
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Anyone able to suggest me another book like this with sex and the same type of story ish?