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Let's play a game.
What is the most important thing in life? You have 5 seconds to answer before you lose.
If you chose any answer besides Family, there are no retries. There are no other chances and extra credit.
Follow our Main Character as he becomes a Mafia Boss for his plans on world domination.
"There is no such thing as "right" and "wrong". The victor writes the history books while the loser sits back and accepts it or get eliminated. The winners get praised and everyone thinks of them as Heroes and the reverse for the losers. I've killed, I've pillaged, I've destroyed...and I won." I pull the trigger.
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I like where you're going with this so keep it up and like QUEENWOLFBLOOD said you shouldn't post a chapter for every review.
I don't like that your making people review just so you can put a chapter up. Trust me your get a lot more reviews if your stop asking .your story really good but if people feel like someone try to make them do something there more likely not to do it. It doesn't matter if they love your story.
Love the story don't be discouraged by people who give bad reviews up and downs are a part of life and you don't have to write a 10,000 word chapter just work hard and it will eventually happen maybe not now but definitely later
Doing good with the story so far.
still in the making but the progress is great.
story pacing seems fast but it's still actually in the beginning days.
MC personality seems lackluster and unstable though, must be because of the beginning.
The grammar seems fine, can't really see any mistakes.
also the release rates is quite fast so it's a nice story overall.
not really much of flesh on side characters, maybe you should add some of their pov in the future.
(now that I've given a review.
WORK MORE SLAVE!!!) <--- this seems like a great motto
First of all i dont get those people who have something against the autor for asking for reviews. let him do it. if you want to review do it otherwise dont. it motivates him and might help him to improve his story which we all profit from, dont we?
for the story:
I like how he does his timeskip. it doesnt seem rushed for me and i didnt have problems with empathising with the MC.
Another huge plus in my book is that he seems to update regularyly (at least until he went on hiatus). I hope that will continue now that he upated again. The fast updates make it easier to remember the whole story and to get connections that might otherwise be forgotten.
i loved the story so far and even he said to rewrite it i think that this story still holds a lot of potential. also most rewrites i've read turned into completly different stories. which doesnt makke them bad but i want to know how this one goes on ^^
very good story: its simple but beautiful, very good fight scenes, interesting premise, intruiging characters that we don't forget after 5 chaps, good system layout... all in all, its an amazing story for a system one
This was a good story. But, There's no breathing room when the MC is interacting with others. I have been waiting for a new Chapter for sooo long, and then it went on a hiatus, so unfortunate. The story was just beginning to get interesting.
I like this story a lot and I would very much like to see more. That being said please don't put off this story for long, as of now I believe it has been 2 or 3 months? That puts off some readers from reading and reviewing good stories, but all in all great job.
the writer is not afraid of putting all things we love fron other fandoms inside this novel, the gamer is only the start of things
and he wont follow exactly how han acted on his manhwa.
when reborn concepts of dying will flame apeared, and the very fact the mc actually died.
got it? the most powerfull DYING will flame, is obviously the flame of someone who died and got reborn.
this is the sorth of thing i would expect fron the original,
think about it another reborn where the mc is actually the Xv or something and he got betrayed and died just because he was unable to manifest his will flame.
somehow he gets reborn and gain the most powerfull flame.
i would love it.
loving it as of chapter 20
I like it a lot, keep up the good work!!!👍👍👍