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Peter V. Kastell is taken from the cycle of reincarnation and given a purpose.
His purpose can be fulfilled in nearly any way he chooses.

BUT

His soul is damaged. And because of that, he will be disadvantaged in an unforeseen way.
Thanks to a benevolent Goddess he will gain different advantages to compensate.

Along the way, his story will be uncovered, and he will gain powers beyond what he ever thought possible.

A unique Lit-RPG series.

Is mana really all that important anyway???



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Bandicoot
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Oh look the usual usual!  I think I've read this...whoa wait.  This author actually took the time and effort to use the table building abilities to change colors!?

 

First off I actually quite like this story...not the usual start and there seems to be a lot of conflict in the making.  I can see a lot of potential paths this might go.  I'm looking forward to it.

Secondly although the themes might not be new, the presentation is novel enough to keep me reading. 

azorath1234
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This is a very nice, and I can only say one thing. More please.

As for an actual review, the interaction between the characters is nice, giving the mc a "defect" is nice... one question though is what problems did his soul have before being repaired?

The Grammar... well no one is perfect.

The style, pretty good.

I think that about wraps it up, but I'm expecting great things, so far you have most certainly delivered.

Roknar
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pretty much 4's across the board for me. I find it to have excellent world building, good char advancement, not too op. Grammmar is decent and the story if very interesting. Not really unique but interesting. Looking forward to where he is going with this. Really tired of narsistic MC's and stories.

Lasiefo
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Easily the best story from this year

Characters,System,Story and chapter lenght are 10/10 for me

this novel got me more hyped then a good ammount of my favorite translated novels

its hard to find something negativ about the story

i enjoyed it a lot

the only critik i have is that the descriptions are very very detailed and get mentioned a lot

thats good but also a tiny bit annoying

 

Scandalf
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Easily one of the best, if not the best.

Okay, I know what you, who haven't read this story yet and want to decide whether to read it or not  by looking at the reviews, are thinking. All 5 stars? That is just stupid. Well, trust me, it isn't. 

This is probably the only novel I would give all 5 stars on RRL if I were to rate every novel I've read until now once more. It just brings sooo much to this another world/god-goddess champion thing, my mind was just blown. 

The style is so simple and clean, I read the whole thing like I was actually watching a movie, an exceptionally good movie...

As for story, it is not some era changing unique plot or something, but it definitely adds enough to this another world theme to make it look like it's actually a whole different concept that you're reading for the first time. The whole prologue part was just soo good, The amount of times I've read an introduction to a story and the world this well done won't go past the number of fingers on one hand.

Grammar: I am not a native english speaker so I can't say much. But I know that I've never had to stop at the end of a sentece to read it back. No typos. 

Aaand characters... They are realistic. At least the protagonist and the ones who gave him his powers are. Protagonist acts like how you would expect a human with a strong mind to act. He is smart, he can figure out things by himself, he doesn't ask stupid questions that has no purposes, he can understand the obvious later half of the story when someone tells him the first half. But, he can also forget things(only not so important things), he can have difficulties deciding on-choosing things that will affect his entire life(which is infinite by the way), he gets embarassed when he does something shameful/embarrasing, he doesn't just turn into a cold blooded immortal once he realizes everyone acts respectful to him because he knows that respect is something to be earned not something given so he tries hard to earn that respect, but he also loses his cool when others go over the line and start making things difficult for him. 

Anyway, DO NOT, under any circumstances close this novels tab thinking it probably isn't that good. I doubt anyone would regret reading this novel. You might not fall in love with it, but I can assure you that you will bookmark it and read the new chapters when they come out. 

Note to author; I am begging you to not drop this novel. I can't even remember how many times I read great stories just to see they had no uploads for the last few months or to see the author dropping them soon after I find them. And even among all those amazing novels, this one would upset and sadden me the most.

etched_unto_iron
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A real pity this piece of gold isn't gonna be continued (unless I missed some info). A story totally worth reading, one of most interesting books I came across as of late.

EverShadow
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While I wouldn't say that it's a huge groundbreaker in the litRPG genre, I found the story to be engaging and fun throughout the telling. I am quite sad that the author dropped it, but I agree that it was a good idea in the end. The stats and numbers did get confusing at times, and I look forward to the possible rewrite.

Lundynne
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Starts out strong, ends up unreadable

"Show don't tell" is a concept that the author does not seem to be familiar with. The story starts out strong, with a lot of potential, but is ruined as soon as speaking characters are introduced. The MC supposedly has a strong soul, and a strong mind, but half the time he behaves like a timid teenager, and the other half of the time like a cocky teenager. The author should try to match the behaviour of the characters with their position, their history, their power, and the traits he claims they have.

Kydsdad
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I got totally immersed in this book from the first chapter.  My only complaint is that i stated reading it later in the evening and wasnt able to stop.  made for a long day at work the following morning.

kirosyamcha
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Just binge read most of the story in a day ;) and i want MORE! I like the overall story and style so keep on keeping on!