Equilibrium

The whole story is everything but boring. Up till now, (CH 11) the author has created many status screens and most have a unique color. Most authors on this site don't take advantage of the status screens that RRL has on their site. It's one of the things I actually really like about this site. It has amazing potential, with only 10+ chapters released I can't wait for more. 

So... i specifically made an account to make this review. I've been reading fictions on this site since almost 2 years now and its actually this story that made me put in that tiny effort of creating an account. I'm not really that great when it comes to writing reviews, so it might not be that good. Nonetheless I'm trying my hand at it.

The style fits my taste and is easy to read, even if i found myself trying to skip over a bit of the text (little info dumps - evil but necessary). I advise against that in any case as all the details contribute towards painting a picture of the world. Its a bit much (but only rarely) at times what is totally acceptable taking into account that every little bit brings you closer to the world the author is introducing to us. I like the pace - a bit fast at times but still reasonable.

Regarding the story it's a pretty common setup found on this site, HOWEVER, it has a pretty original feel towards it and brings0 fresh air to the genre of reincarnation. Everybody who likes that type of story should give it a try, as I'm sure you will probably find it quite an enjoyable read.Not much to say about the grammar. It's pretty good, there are tiny errors, but they dont subtract anything from the joy of reading this story. Solid high five Mr. Author.

The story is still in its beginning, with a couple of characters introduced into the story, which are lively and fleshed out to a certain degree. Still as early into the story there is still room for character development. Quite good in my opinion, nothing wrong with that.Overall i give this fiction a solid 5 stars, just because i think this story has top 10 potential if the author plays his cards right in terms of world building and character development.

TL, DR: Gud stori, moar pls i r8 11/10

The story is simply amazing. The use of LitRPG is simply amazing. I've never seen such an innovative use of litRPG before and im eager for more.

Style score: 5/5

The Author simply has complete grasp on the language and the story seems to flow and never be abrupt. I also think he manages the infodumps well and uses status screen ridiculously well.

Story score: 4/5

As far as what I can see the author is going to weave an amazing story. I docked one point cause the story has just about begun. I'll add the star once the story has progressed far enough.

Grammer score: 4.5/5

Very few mistakes and well done.

Character score: 4/5

The characters maintain enough of their own individual personalities which are distinct enough. However the characters seem to be following a generic path taken by most fictions. Also it doesn't really seem to be an anti-hero protagonist yet.

Overall: 5/5

Amazing to read. I hope the author continues the book.

pretty much 4's across the board for me. I find it to have excellent world building, good char advancement, not too op. Grammmar is decent and the story if very interesting. Not really unique but interesting. Looking forward to where he is going with this. Really tired of narsistic MC's and stories.

This is an amazing story with characters that actually feel alive and not some emotionless robots that can speak only 3-4 words.

So if you have time,for the love of Adrestia, READ IT !!  You may not belive me,but its that good.

Blitzed my way thru this after discovering it. Thoroughly enjoyable. Good characters, well written and not just concentrating on an OP MC going out and blasting everything that moves. 

Yes the main is OP in physical BUT he is having to slowly learn his abilities and use his intelligence to plan ahead for unknown eventualities. 

Looking forward to continuing to read this. Keep up the good work. Oh, and hurry up with the releases..I want to know what happens^^

Interesting plot, but the characters and character interaction seem flat

It's a lot of Character A is mad, Character B is happy instead of genuine feels

It also annoyed me that he scans the elf girl to find out she is an elf and then the next time he scans he can't see any info cause she was wearing a ring that blocked it

did she just randomly forget to wear her ring that one time, seems forced

actually, a good amount of the book seems forced

Characters,System,Story and chapter lenght are 10/10 for me

this novel got me more hyped then a good ammount of my favorite translated novels

its hard to find something negativ about the story

i enjoyed it a lot

the only critik i have is that the descriptions are very very detailed and get mentioned a lot

thats good but also a tiny bit annoying

This is a very nice, and I can only say one thing. More please.

As for an actual review, the interaction between the characters is nice, giving the mc a "defect" is nice... one question though is what problems did his soul have before being repaired?

The Grammar... well no one is perfect.

The style, pretty good.

I think that about wraps it up, but I'm expecting great things, so far you have most certainly delivered.

Just binge read most of the story in a day ;) and i want MORE! I like the overall story and style so keep on keeping on!