Evolution-revolution ! ( On Hiatus.... I will never give up... just need time. )

Evolution-revolution ! ( On Hiatus.... I will never give up... just need time. )

by Inslayer

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy

In a green planet, much like earth.

A silvery round ball appeared out of seemingly nowhere.

No, it was silver in color, but in fact it seemed like it was something organic...

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In a world full of magic and unplea- I mean pleasant surprises, a being like no other appeared. A life form like no other... or wait, what the !?!?

An experimental weapon made from gods ?

A being made to destroy?

Wait ! Gods ??? What the heck ?.... 

Something went wrong in the experiment, and what seemed like a success, failed... and so they threw it in a "trash" world, at least then it would be forgotten by everyone.. or would it ?

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