Dust to Dust

by BeelzeBuff

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy
The cycles of life, death, and variations thereof in a nonstandard world, and the gift that is born of them. Heroes aren't born and neither are they made, they evolve.
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Neva
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Unique story of survival and growth told from a non-human perspective

I am glad I gave this a chance. Currently on chapter 8 and I am loving it so far. 

It is well written and the formatting is easy on the eyes; so much so that it captured and kept my attention and I didn't skim the reading like I do with almost ever story on this site. 

 

I like how information is presented in a non-boring manner and sometimes accompanied by feels from a sadistic author who really should visit a therapist. 

 

The MC's opponents are not "bad" beings, they are enemies due to different in desire outcomes and conflict arise form this. The MC is not a righteous being either.

 

 

 

 

ckxsl023
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Nice Story, original and unique

Very unique, great grammar and nice way of telling the story through the non-human perspective. The only downside is the lack of detail in the description of the Rock dog. Greatly interesting, a fiction that is reincarnation with a twist of rabbit persona and game-like world setting. Slow paced growth at the start but i think i will probably go faster in the future. Continue the great work and provide more interesting adventures in the days to come. 

Elijah808
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Action? Yes. Adventure? Hai. Comedy? Nei. Fantasy? Si. Mature? Oui. Original? Yosh.

This FanFic is one of the most original I have come across. The beginning may start out slow and short for some people, but I find the pace great as it develops the story in manner that allows you to visualize and place yourself next to the character as the story unfolds. Also, the main character is a badass bunny golem! Follow this bunny as he was killed and turned into a golem, then left to survive on his own, growing and becoming much more than a harmless herbivore into... well I don't know because it's only started. But that's also one of this FanFic's strength as you're in a Roller Coaster ride and you have the faintest idea where you're getting off. I highly recommend as this is a great read and has tons of potential!

MagicScroll101
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I love it definitely recommend

 Awesomely done novel i love how it describes how he constructs his body

 

hohothepro
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a really interesting plot, good grammar and a good buildup (not making the protag insta-op and shit)

 are you still continuing this series? i’d love for this to continue, singe it’s been.. 4~5 months since the last release…. just saying…

GoatDragon
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I really like the idea of this fanfic . It's original I like the idea of him being a golem and can't wait to see what he becomes. :D

 

FateSeries
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i dont usually give review, but when i do...

the stroy left me with good impression. I look forward for next update. and if possible, please finish this ff. Thank you.

BlissForgotten
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I like how empathetic we can be with what started as a pile of dust with the soul of a rabbit! I feel like we're the parents as we watch this little critter grow and prosper at the merciful hands of you, so keep up the good work. 5/5

TheCatPerson
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Good story.

Original concept [Or so I think].

Looking forward to see where this goes.

 

Could use semicolons " ; " in some places.

^ Nitpicking.

kites11
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This is Awesome. I really like the direction the story is going in so far and I hope you keep up the good work!